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Submitted: Sep 5, 2008 Reads: 32 Comments: 4 Likes: 3
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Awww, Juliet ^_^
its as if you brought me right into your room and I could see the picture and the imagination began and felt the tension of mind slide away. wow so cool.
wonderful to read you today
~katie
Posted: Sep 6, 2008
Juliet what came to me before I saw Katie's comment was how much this came from you. It is a poem that makes the author seem so real, so close. As Katie says "right into your room" and your worls. I loved it.
Posted: Sep 10, 2008
U know what draws us towards ur writings and why i keep asking for more...
they r damn honest...true and straight from a mother's heart and reaching all of us with such honesty....
i could imagine that kid and the face of the person who would open the door is yours...in my dreams...
believe me, i dreamt about this...
This is such a lovely poem ...helped me have a peaceful sleep...THANKS JULIET...
Posted: Sep 22, 2008
I to can see the picture - good writing
Posted: Oct 13, 2008
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