
Now fear does not haunt me

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TWO DIFFRENT FEARS LOCKED UP IN ONES MIND..... View table of contents...
Submitted: Jan 13, 2008 Reads: 68 Comments: 6 Likes: 3

Now fear does not haunt me
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Very sad and moving yet there is strength in it and in you. Powerful piece of work.
Posted: Jan 13, 2008
Juliet, Very Powerful and Emotional! Yes when we live in fear we are held captive by it, we remain victims of that state of awareness, and it goes on and on till' we decide like you said; "with the help of God"
through the asking and acknowledging that strength in him becomes our own. *bless you and your heart felt dreams* may the strength that abides in us be the course that guides us....love, love, katie
Posted: Jan 13, 2008
I love this as poetry; it reveals so much of the pain, hurt, and fears over the years. Poetry can act better than any psychologist can to get through things if given time and the right frame of mind. It brings in this fine poem a form of conclusion and peace of mind and thereby the soul.
Posted: Jan 15, 2008
Bless you... this is an excellent piece of poetry. Thanks for sharing your emotions with us. Peace and happiness.....Jerry
Posted: Jan 15, 2008
Very Beautiful Stuff and all very true.
"Two different fears fought in my head
One be a beating the other you dying"
The Rogue Hat Traders
Posted: Feb 3, 2008
Great write its filled with pain but with Hope also. it does have strength throughout the piece. well done.
Posted: Feb 11, 2008
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