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HELL'S PAY DAY

Poem By: mum55
Memoir


Tags: job, pain, rain, car, hell, money

i RETURNED TO WORK AFTER A YEAR OFF SICK AND NOW THIS IS WHAT HAPPENED........ View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Apr 29, 2008    Reads: 68    Comments: 9    Likes: 6   


They twisted my mind for five days,
My feelings, my sight mind in a maze,
I crashed my car yet again,
All because of the pain and strain,
 
Thursday my heart was racing my mouth dry,
Thoughts all scrambled,
I sobbed and I cried, shaking and wondering just why
Nothing looked bright not even the sky,
 
It’s was thunder poring in this poor heart of mine
Tears flowed like a gushing river
Panic and pain like you will never know,
How I let them make me feel like this, I ask,
 
I worked for three months
Now no money for rent
No money for food,
They screwed up my wages
Then just took all my pay to pay back what I did not know I owed
 
For the last nine months now, I know
While I was off sick
They messed it all up and I have to pay it all back
 
After the Thunder had passed these few days
I stood up for my rights
I told them I’D PAY only my way
For the money I owe
Was there mistake that they made
NOT MINE,
 
So at last today I was able to smiled again
Away went the pain away went the strain
But now I hate my job I do each day
Can not wait for the day
To Say Good buy Farewell
To a job and company that are Hell!!!!!


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Comments:

Aw, you poor thing. I think you need to be in a different job, seeing as we spend half owe lives working we have to make sure it's worthy.

I enjoyed this read and I wish you better days. ~ Gypsy

Posted: Apr 30, 2008

Author Comment:

Gipsy you are so right we do spend most of our lives at work....but i know i will be leaving soon.....as i intend to start my own bussiness.....just waiting for my insurance money from my car accident then i will leave....thankyou for your kind words of support and may the sun shine for you and happy days ahead......kindest regards juliet

Am so sorry to hear of your downfall. Life is so cruel. Just to chear you up I have just had to pay a 'car tax'fine on a car a sold to the garage and 'parking fine' wherethe nowriting on the road was in WELSH! All this admidst renovations to my flat and i'm in one hell of a mess. Life is so unfair. Wish you better times ahead.

miss mary

Posted: Apr 30, 2008

Author Comment:

Hi Miss Mary.....Life what it sends us to deal with...still with each mess comes strength for the next thunder storm that hites...hope you are sorting everything out and you get some peace and sunshine soon....your freind Juliet

Irwin
(not registered user)

Most of us have to drive up hill ever inch of the way just to fall downhill on the other side, few of us experience times that are smooth and level and a sheer joy to live. The best any of us can do is to support each other. 'The Times They Are A Changing'!

Posted: Apr 30, 2008

Author Comment:

Hi Irwin thankyou so much for the support and not long till the changes do happen.....Hope the sun shining for you Take care Juliet

So sorry to hear that juliet.. You should definitely find a new job, somewhere you can excel and where people treat you better.^^

Wishing you happier days juliet.^^

One biiiiiiiiig hug for you.^^
hmmmmmmm!^^

Posted: Apr 30, 2008

Author Comment:

Hi Punishment thanks so much for the support, When my insurance money for my car accident comes i will leave and start my own Bussiness, Themed Rock and Roll parties can't wait.......I have to say your writing has excelled greatly...very inspiring and you have a great tallent...Till Later hope the sun shines for you Juliet

Good on you for standing up. We all have to make a stand at times. Hope when the time comes to say "farewell" that you can get up and do a dance on the table. Your poem tells us a story.

Posted: Apr 30, 2008

Author Comment:

Hi Anna thank you for the support..and roll on car insurance mney and i am walking out no notice......hope you are well and the sun is shining for you....take care Juliet

Juliet, I hate to hear that you were in such mental anguish. I wish there was something I could do.
Did you ever see the emails I sent you?
You can email me anytime.
Honestly different work like maybe something you could do at home? Would that be worth looking into?
This poem of yours is very touching and i am very glad to be reading something from you. it has been some time now, and I can see why you haven't had the frame of mind. So sorry, much love and concern ~katie

Posted: Apr 30, 2008

Author Comment:

Hi Katie so glad that is over, just waiting for mt car accident money then i am off and goingto start my own bussiness, Doing theamed Rock and Roll Parties!!!!.
Hope You are well and the sun shining with you....Take care peace and love to you Juliet

You have to go through the trouble and strife to get to where you want to be in life I guess Juliet, nice to hear that you have got through the worst bit.

Posted: May 1, 2008

Author Comment:

Cheers Brian for the support and yes thankfully i have, hope your well? and have a great Day Juliet

Stand up to them and push back twice as hard !!!

I am sorry this is happening to you after you have gone through so much.

I wish you brighter days Juliet

Peace

Boneman

Posted: May 3, 2008

Author Comment:

Hi Boneman thank you fot the support Roll on my car insurance pay out! then they can go to hell i will be off....have a great day juliet

I hope things are better now or you found something better? Nice job with the poam.

Posted: Jun 2, 2008

Author Comment:

Thankyou again Dragonfly still there at present but not for long!!



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