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Submitted: Feb 6, 2008 Reads: 298 Comments: 15 Likes: 5
Fingers so fine and hands sograceful
Your body sleek and innocent as a baby,
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Beautiful. This is a great piece. Good writing! Regards~Deb
Posted: Feb 6, 2008
Oh, small correction,(think)
The line;
Reminding me of the softness of a feather soft and gental,( did you mean to write Gentle?
Other than that, it's a great read!
Posted: Feb 6, 2008
Very gentle and kind poem
Posted: Feb 6, 2008
Lovely poem, nice expressions
Posted: Feb 6, 2008
Nice poem Juliet, very expressive
Posted: Feb 6, 2008
Loving And Full of positivity as all good memeories should be .
Posted: Feb 6, 2008
sorry that should have read memories.
xxx
Posted: Feb 6, 2008
Forever touched, forever treasured.
Posted: Feb 7, 2008
lovely... what would we do without our beautiful memories? Blessings to you, Juliet.....Jerry
Posted: Feb 7, 2008
Very Lovely! "I hear your heart beat like the echoes of a drum" Love that line* Moving and beautifully written Juliet :) katie
Posted: Feb 7, 2008
It is very good to read another poem of yours! It is beautiful and sensible . Wonderful writing !
Posted: Feb 10, 2008
Love how you wrote it in such an elegant way, nice job!
Posted: Feb 13, 2008
A very wonderful poem, once you have loved and been loved that feeling never goes away. Once a life touches yours it stays with you forever.
More please
Peace
Boneman
Posted: Feb 14, 2008
Beautiful! It shows a lot of true love, though there are a number of spelling errors.
-Cathy
Posted: Feb 15, 2008
You are so expressive and uplifting! Great poem!
Posted: Feb 18, 2008
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