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OH! WHAT A FOOL

Poem By: mum55
Memoir


NO MORE THE FOOL !!!! View table of contents...

 

Submitted: May 9, 2008    Reads: 58    Comments: 2    Likes: 6   


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OH! WHAT A FOOL
Listening to the rhythm of the pouring rain,
It’s telling me just what a fool I have been.
Loving you, trusting you,
Making dreams with you,
Oh! What a fool,
I trusted you, gave it all to you,
My heart, my love, my life just, about too,
Then you abused it, When all I
Just wanted was you. to love me too,
Oh! What a fool,
I thought love was a magical thing
It would keep me from pain
You twist your knife,
I wish I could go back in time,
Oh! What a fool,
Too love you, only you
Waiting and watching time,
Hoping one day,
You will really be mine,
Oh! What a fool
You stepped on me, treat me like dirt,
Now alone in a great big town,
Nights can get so lonely,
I wonder where love is
Oh! What a fool
Has it passed me buy
I am lonely and blue,
All alone with nothing to do,
No lover’s arms to hold me
Oh! What a fool
Yet love does bloom
Hear in my heart
For you’re no longer hear to drown it
Abuse I, use it,
So Guess what NO MORE THE FOOL!!!!!
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Comments:

hi! juliet. it does seem bad to be taken for granted but u finally say that u'll survive. nice. ;-)

Posted: May 15, 2008

Author Comment:

Life to short to worry really take care Juliet

I dislike such people who take others for granted and cheat on them. You bring out this ethos very well. Love it.

Posted: Jun 3, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you Eliza fir you kind comments have a nice day Juliet :)



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