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THE GIFT OF LOVE

Poem By: mum55
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GIVEN ONLY ONE PRECIOUS HEART IF NURTURED IT WILL BLOOM AND LAST View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Mar 8, 2008    Reads: 106    Comments: 12    Likes: 7   


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 THE GIFT OF LOVE

It is a gift we can not hold,
It is a gift we can not buy,
It’s the gift of love,
Always here inside,
 
Emotions buried,
Desires with held,
Fear of trusting,
We protect this love,
Deep with in,
Our hearts shell.
 
With love brings patience,
Our love rejoices in the right,
True love is not jealous or boastful,
It makes us kind,
With love in heart,
It never insists on its own way,
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Protected within us,
Just waiting to flourish,
Like the bud of a rose,
Slowly wanting to bloom,
When given in haste,
It’s thrown back in our face,
 
Bringing heartache and sorrow,
Others not appreciating its worth,
So remember loves honest
True from the heart,
Give it slowly let it bloom and grow,
For you only have one heart,
Do not let others tear it apart,
 
You will know when to share it,
For they understand,
These true feelings buried inside
Will walk with you side by side,

 

For they will flourish and bloom like the rose,alt

 Showing you love shared together,

 Brings Truth and strength

And will nurture its growth.


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This such a beautiful piece Juliet, so many of us forget how important love and all it's wonders are. I'm inspired ~ KB

Posted: Mar 8, 2008

Author Comment:

Hi Kinkyboots SH..... Thankyou for your wonderfull comment and have a happy day Juliet

a very appropiate poem to me, as I feel at present, it has given me strength and re-newness in LOVE.
Thanks Juliet.
Miss mary

Posted: Mar 8, 2008

Author Comment:

Miss Mary thankyou again for such wonderfull comments....i wish you happiness and peace your friend Juliet

Sometimes, love is the only thing that gets us through the day! Thanks Juliet, for an inspiring and uplifting poem. WIshing you the peace that only love can bring.....Jerry

Posted: Mar 8, 2008

Author Comment:

Jerry firstly happy days to you and thankyou for you faithfull comments.........and your right love helps through days and life......Take great care till later Juliet

Gendral Sulamani
(not registered user)

this poem makes roses bloom in winter.
:)

Posted: Mar 8, 2008

Author Comment:

Thankyou so much for your kind comment...Take care Juliet

Ah Juliet! (smile) 'a gift we can not hold' 'a gift we can not buy' 'the gift of love' 'always here inside' these words are so sweet and nurturing!
this is a precious one Juliet! (smile)

Posted: Mar 8, 2008

Author Comment:

Hi Katie thankyou so much for your faithfull comments.....and it is a gift we can not buy so true.......happy days to you til later love and peace Juliet

very beautiful!

Posted: Mar 8, 2008

Author Comment:

April (Nice Month) thankyou for your lovely comment will check out your work.....Take care Juliet

Gorgeous and so beautifully presented. Reminds us of what true love is.

Posted: Mar 8, 2008

Author Comment:

Anna what price love.....thankyou for your wonderful comments,,,,Happy days Juliet

Nice work Juliet

Posted: Mar 9, 2008

Author Comment:

Thankyou so much Brian take care Juliet

I love it. "Protected within us, Just waiting to flourish,Like the bud of a rose,Slowly wanting to bloom,When given in haste,It’s thrown back in our face" just really got me inside. Great work.

Love Always,
Erin

Posted: Mar 9, 2008

Author Comment:

Thankyou very much for your great comment, happy days Juliet

A sweet poem although love seems to be presented as a possession, something that you own and choose whom to give it too. I believe love is a power that flows freely through everybody every second of every day. like a universal river of joy.The only thing that stops its supply is the human mind thinking that love is limited and the fear/desire to dam and own the supply.
Love is the strangest of energies the more you give(unconditionally) the more you have(unconditionally)If It's given with a true heart as a true gift it can never return and hurt you.Only fear can cause pain only the mind can contaminate the flow of love.
love and light

Posted: Mar 11, 2008

Author Comment:

Hi Paul have not heard from you for a while...thankyou for your detailed comment i agree with most of it...I only hope your well and your act is doing well...Lots and Lots of Love Juliet xxx

A very inspirational piece. Great writing Juliet

Posted: Mar 19, 2008

Author Comment:

Thankyou whitehart for your very kind support and comments,,,Take care have a nice Easter til later Juliet

Very beautiful and inspiring. It reminds me of those Forewards I get in my emails! It's very positive and uplifting.

Posted: May 4, 2008

Author Comment:

MA thankyou for your kind comments have a nice day juliet



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