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The Raindrops

Poem By: pearlinanoyster
Memoir


Drops of rain are often like drops of memory left behind; both following a cyclical process, making you see the other image in your mirror. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Jun 22, 2007    Reads: 91    Comments: 6    Likes: 2   


altRaindrops

Raindrops fall,

On leaves, clay pots, glass panes.

Each one has a different resonance striking a distinct note

Each time they fall;

A new lake of hope regains within me

Each drop promises me of new life and,

I see fresh green foliage in my barren desert,

Raindrops fall,

Trickling into my mind, my sensibilities, my soul,

Just like you.

I see you in each one of these raindrops,

Their languid lingering playing with my fingers

Remind me of some blurry wet afternoons and,

Some almost forgotten moments, which resurface nimbly

In raindrops, again…

Raindrops fall,

Big and heavy,

Bringing deluge to cleanse the earth,

To wipe it clean of slime, slur and slush

To wipe out all pains of remembering, forgiving and re-thinking.

Raindrops fall,

As I lie awash

Becoming all of sixteen again, fresh, vibrant, pure and untouched by sin…


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Comments:

Very "resonant"! A drop like the right thought changes perspective!
Kentero

Posted: Jun 22, 2007

Author Comment:

Thanks!I liked the word "resonant". Very true and yes, very inspiring.Indeed a thought is strong enough to do wonders, while it can also provoke a catastrophe.

great job! its helpfull in so many ways for me.

Posted: Jun 22, 2007

Author Comment:

Thanks!would like to do more of this in future.

pearlinanoyster:

This poem was terrific. For it's use of natural imagery of rain as one's source of love and life. Great job.

Happy trails,

Ed Bradley.

Posted: Sep 23, 2007

Author Comment:

Thank you. I'm an avid nature lover and lose myself in the arms of nature, whenever I am out of my cubicle.

Radhika
(not registered user)

This was a really nice piece of work. Makes one remember one's lost love bringing back painful memories of that someone so special...........

Posted: Nov 12, 2007

Author Comment:

Thank you. :)

AMEN !

Posted: May 28, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks Pratibha. :)

hi! p. a very youthful poem. ur comparing it with memory is refreshing. good job. ;-)

Posted: Jun 9, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks Bubbly. :) Yes, I feel raindrops are a reminder of past happennings and how those memories keep resurfacing into one's present.



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