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Losing Uncle Tom

Poem By: poet 3
Memoir


A poem I wrote recently about memories I have of my late Uncle Tom, who died of prostate cancer in 1996.

*In loving memory of Uncle Thomas Gore, beloved uncle and friend* View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Sep 10, 2008    Reads: 65    Comments: 4    Likes: 2   


Disappearing smiles,

Fading photographs,

Hidden in molding files…

Child-like laughs,

Echo off empty walls.

Piggyback rides,

Strolls down the halls,

Long forgotten in waves and tides…

This little girl,

At six years old,

Spinning in a twirl,

Couldn’t ever be told…

His face forgotten,

Ten years past,

Memories short and softened,

Of him, smiling his last…

Remembered now,

With love and tears,

Looking back, I don’t know how

I missed their fears…

To a little child,

He was a graceless dancer,

Funny and wild,

With a deadly cancer…

How I missed it, I’m not sure,

The coffins and stones all look the same,

I never knew where we were,

All I could say, was Uncle Tom never came…


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Soft and warming memoir. I love that he was a graceless dancer! Tells me how well you know him, written most fondly. We all have our little quirks, sometimes when someone dies we always focus on the "good" stuff - for you to see him "warts and all" expresses to me your love. Wonderful.

Posted: Sep 10, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you.
I really don't know how I remember those things about him, I was only six when he died, but I guess those were the things that stuck out the most to me.
Thanks for the wonderful comment.

~Apples~

A beautiful rememberance of your uncle. Sweet and sad. I'm sure he'd love it.

Posted: Sep 10, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you so much.
I hope he likes it, though my aunt says he wasn't much of a poetry person!

~Apples~

This is truly amazing. I really like it! It's so sad. But yet so touching. It flowed so nicely. I can connect with this so much. As I lost my younger sister to cancer almost two years ago! Well take care!
~Love~
Cassie

Posted: Nov 5, 2008

Author Comment:

I'm sorry for your loss, as it is much more recent than mine. Good luck and keep strong!

Wow, April. This is, this is amazing. This is really, truly great. I loved it.

Posted: Nov 15, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks.
It was supposed to be a journal entry in my writing with style class. And it kind of developed into a completed poem.



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