I got real mad when my mom came home crying....Torks me off to see any one in my family crying... View table of contents...

Submitted: Mar 13, 2008    Reads: 31    Comments: 3    Likes: 0   

The pain of my loved one’s heart

Is tearing me apart

The pains so new

I wish it weren’t true

A simple “I love” wouldn’t suffice

For the heart can’t heal

With out suffering first

This the only thing that hurts worse

Is not see my family happy and glad

Or been with people who love you so

NO!

The pain of the heart

I wouldn’t let tear us apart

For now I know and now I see

My loved one’s true tragedy.

Loss of job she held so dear

Fired off lies and misinterpreted fears

Nay I say tis not right

For me to fill with fright

I’ll be here now for you ever more

To support and cheer you to delight

To comfort you when in pain

I have only one thing to gain

The lesson of the pain

Of my loved one’s heart!

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Comments:

Sasha Neko

Sasha thinks it is sad, but also feels surprissingly hopeful.

Posted: Mar 13, 2008

Author Comment:

I am glad you feel that way that was the emotion I was aiming for^_^

poewhit

Shows a deep thought of understanding.

Posted: Mar 14, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks I was realy mad and filled with pain when I wrote this one

Itsuwari

Iz okay. Could've sworn I commented on this piece already...

Posted: Apr 12, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks^_^

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