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Submitted: Oct 21, 2007 Reads: 49 Comments: 2 Likes: 4
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Ah...what a lovely read! The visual you create is subtle, yet powerful at the same time. Exactly the kind of poetry I like to read (and hopefully write) as it is very thought provoking. Very nice! Thanks for sharing, I thoroughly enjoyed it ~ K
Posted: Oct 21, 2007
there are so many good lines in this poem it's hard to pick out one. the first line though is my favorite:
A lonely man carrying dreams as books in his arms
i won't forget this for a long time. really great. i ook forward to reading more of your work.
Posted: Dec 21, 2007
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