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This one`s not great, I kind of hate it. It`s one of my older works, I wrote it about two years ago, but I`m too lazy to fix it up.

Submitted:Sep 1, 2008    Reads: 105    Comments: 1    Likes: 1   

On the surface she was nobody, she did not exist to the outside world. Deep down she wanted someone to come, to reach out to her, to touch her. She needed it. Somebody finally did, and they listened. They listened like nobody had ever listened to her before. They listened to the secret she hid deep in her heart. She didn't know she still had a heart all the way down their. She thanked her new friend for helping her, they had saved her from eternal suffering. But as her saviour drifted away, she could feel them pulling at her heart, pulling on the secret she clung to.


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