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The Vala Ashbel Mystery's

Article By: swords edge
Mystery and crime



gonna write this after unwanted protector, doesn't it sound awesome? gonna be my first mystery so wish me luck!


Submitted:Nov 5, 2010    Reads: 36    Comments: 0    Likes: 0   


Vala has to investigate a crime done at her own school after seeing how the preppy brunette was killed, rapped in red and black ribbons that were used to strangle her earlier. Her dad, single since her mother died only a year before, told her like on every other case he worked not to ask questions or help them find the killer. Vala listened all the past times he had told her to but something about this case had her on the hook keeping her awake at night running through all the reasons anyone might hurt her and way they would kill her in that way… but what she isn't expecting is to be drawn to the point of threat mail from unknown people that tell her if she doesn't stop working the case they will kidnap her and hold her for ransom. She doesn't believe them, until she's fallowed home one night. Vala is pulled into a strange murder that she must solve before the one who killed once with red and black shows her how it's done with a live game, and she's the target…





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