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A girl tries to discover the mystrey behind her brothers death View table of contents...


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Submitted:Sep 5, 2011    Reads: 5    Comments: 1    Likes: 1   

I had thought about how his death was so weird and what if I was wrong. I was certain he was killed, but how to prove it? How to figure it out? I was sure if I told my parents I thought Jed was killed, they would not take it as some sort of joke or something; They'll get angry at me. I decided to tell peoplke who would actually believe me. I slowly slipped out of the room. it wasn't really necessary the only people who would have notice where my older brother an sister but if they tried to tell my parents wouldn't really care though.

I went out the back door to go out. I went to my friend's house, Kate. I told her about how I thought Jed was murdered. She didn't laugh, she took me seriously. I then asked, " Your Uncle works as a police detective. Can you and him help because I actually think someone killed him." She didn't laugh like I had expected, she said, "Yes. Have you thought about witnesses?" She asked.

"I had'nt really." I replied. It was obvious but yet I hadn't thought of it.

I then reached for a piece of paper and pen.

I wrote on it:

Steps to solve the murder.

1. Suspects
2. Statements and alabies.
3. Evidence



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