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The End...Or Was It???

Novel By: sllgvbooks
Mystery and Crime


Tonight was the scariest night of the year. It wasn't Halloween, it was just a regular night ........... or we thought but we were wrong!


Let me start at the beginning. My name is Camryn. Here's how it all started. There's this house next to a graveyard. Nobody knows how it got there, who lives there, or what lives there. Some people say they pass the graveyard at night and they can see a shadow in the window. But it's not a shadow of a person. It has a humped back and the dog shaped face! They think it's a ware wolf! The question that always lays in the back of my head is........ Is it really a ware wolf or is it something scarier????????? View table of contents...

Chapters:

1 2 3 4 5 6 7

Submitted: Jul 27, 2008    Reads: 46    Comments: 2    Likes: 1   


Chapter 2

It All Begins!

So here I am sitting in school in the most boring class ever, Spanish. Our teachers name is Penny Zilocowski. We call her Ms. Z for short. I sit there looking at the clock which reads 2:59:55. I count down in my head 5......4.......3.....2......1. BRINGGGGGGGGGGGG! Everyone jumps out of their seat and heads towards the door. “Wait a minute! Everyone sit down. Once everyone is quiet you may leave.” See, that's why this is my least favorite class, our teacher always makes us stay after class so we're late leaving school. 5 minutes later...........

OK, you can leave now .”

After class I met my friends Haley, Alexis, Grace, and Sammy. Everyday I walk home with them.

Hey guys!” I said

Hey!” they all said

How much homework do you guys have?” asked Haley

Not much” I answered

Me either” said Alexis and Grace

Just some science” said Sammy

You guys want to come over?” asked Haley

Sure” we all said

To get to Haley's house we had to pass that dreaded house next to the creepy graveyard. We were all walking in silence, thinking about the graveyard, and we were getting close when all of the sudden.......

Do you think the story is true?” I asked

JEEZ!” they all yelled

What did I do?”

You scared us!” said Alexis

Sorry” I said “but can you answer the question?”

Can you say the question again I didn't hear it” asked Grace

Do you think the story is true?” I asked again

you mean the story of the ware wolf?” asked Sammy

Yep!” I answered

I don't really know not really but I mean who knows?” said Haley

I don't know either” said Alexis

Me neither” said Grace

I don't know” said Sammy

I mean I don't know either but I think it might be true, well you've seen the scary movies with the ware wolfs!” I said

Well yeah but movies are fake!” said Haley

I know,” I said “ but there is still a possibility it's true.”

As we walked past the graveyard a chill went down our spines as if a cold breeze had just blown. But it hadn't. It was 80 degrees outside and there was not going to be a cold breeze. We all wondered why but didn't ask, but we all thought the same thing “Brrrrrrrr...... why did I get cold there's no breeze!”

After we got to Haley's house we ate a snack and played Twister then it all started

Haley why are you doing so bad?”

Because all I can think about is that house and well you know”

What the ware wolf?” said Sammy

SAMMY!”

What?”

We all knew what she was talking about you didn't have to say anything”

Sorry guys”

Hey today is Friday you should just sleepover tonight”

Yeah that would be so much fun but we have to call my mom.” said Alexis

Mine too!” I said

ditto!” exclaimed Sammy

Right!” said Grace

My parents are already here!” said Haley

We all laughed in unison. After we called our parents, Grace had an idea.

Let's go to the graveyard”

NO WAY!”

Come on guys”

I'll go!” exclaimed Alexis

We would have to sneak out around midnight”

(Around Midnight)

Ready to go?” I asked

Yes”

OK”

Si”

Let's go!”

We're here” I said in a whispered tone

Suddenly a growl was heard!

Never mind let's go home!”

RUN!”

As we got back to Haley's house and sat down in her living room we all started talking and asking questions about the graveyard.

What do you think made that sound?”

Do you think it was a ware wolf?”

I'm not sure but I want to go back there. We will never know what's lurking around out there if we don't even try to find out” said Haley sounding really excited.

Are you crazy?”

Never!”

Well, maybe”

Not in a million years!”

Fine if you won't go I will” said Haley trying to be brave.

Be my guest!” said Sammy

OK I will. If you get scared or hear any noises just call me. My cell phone will be on. My number is 555-1234. Camryn I know you have my number memorized, so don't be afraid to call,” Haley replied. So Haley grabbed her coat from the closet and went out the door. While inside Alexis was doing bad at Twister.

Stop yo bad habits Alexis!” I exclaimed

Outside Haley was creeping around back to the living room window. This is where Alexis, Grace, Sammy, and I were.

Grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr. SNAP! Tap, Tap, Tap!”

Haley was making these sounds just to scare the girls inside.

OMG! What was that?” I asked

Call Haley Call Haley!” exclaimed Grace

I dialed Haley's number and no one answered. Then the doorknob on the living room door started to turn.

Everyone grab a pillow and throw it towards the door when it opens” said Sammy.

Creeeeeeeeeeekkkk! The door opened.

THROW!” shouted Alexis

Four pillows were being tossed in the air. They all hit the person at the door.

It's just me!” said Haley trying to hold back her laughs.

You scared us half to death!” I said

It was me the whole time making the noises and tapping on the window” said Haley “Did I really scare you?”

Yeah!” we all said

That was really fun!” said Haley

No it wasn't!”

Well I mean for me”

But it was fun throwing the pillows at you”

For the rest of the night we played some more games and only slept for a couple of hours. I don't get why they call them sleepovers because no one ever sleeps! Anyway for breakfast we had French toast with syrup, sausage, and strawberries. After breakfast Haley started to talk about the graveyard AGAIN!

I think we should all go back to the graveyard, but more in the day time!” said Haley

I love mysteries!” Grace said

Me too!” I agreed

Then we can all go”

Alexis and Sammy seemed a little hesitant but then they got in the mystery solver kind of mood.

First we need to make a plan to not get caught.” I said

And figure out if the thing in the house is a ware wolf!” said Grace

Ok you guys lets make a plan” said Haley

Alright first I think we have to find one question we want to answer and find that answer no matter what.” said Alexis

We should find out if it's a ware wolf or not!” said Sammy

How are we suppose to do that?” I asked

That's why we need to make a plan!” said Grace


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Comments:

Its alright, but the exchanging of dialogue between the characters is choppy and it doesnt really flow. But it DOES have potential.

Posted: Aug 26, 2008

Author Comment:

yea we started this story a while ago and back then we werent as good writing wise as we are now but thank you for the advice ill work on it :)

hi! s. this is interesting. u've carried forward the story very well. there is a definite plan in finding the ware wolf. keep rolling. lol. ;-)

Posted: Sep 29, 2008



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