The Girl (Chapter One)

The only criminal doctor was in Ethan's mansion in L.A. He was staring of at Holly's naked body and tutting loudly, greatly annoying Ethan. "You should have taken her out of there once you realized she wasn''t gonna go with your scheme even if you kill her. Now she is near death's door I'm afraid," said the doctor with another rows of rather loud tuts. "So you can't do anything? She will not get bettter?" asked Ethan looking as if he'd lost a sister not ransom. "Unless you can get her to a better doctor! Like the ones the rich people have! Besides who cares anyway? You can pretend she's alive for the ransom! It'll take more work but hey they don't call you Ethan for nothing!" said the doctor suprised. Ethan smiled and said "They don't call me Ethan for nothing!" Doctor nodded happpily until Ethan spit in his face saying "They call me Ethan because its my name!" The evil doctor removed from spit from his contacts and put them back on very sharply. "You almost seem sad! You must have killed her after words! Sure like this she dies with less screaming and begging and bieng chained but this works too! You couldn't actually give her back or leave her behind!" said the doctor more confused then ever but then smiled when he saw Ethan. Three loud tuts. TUT. TUT. TUT. "You can't develope feelings for the captive! Alhough she is hot!" said the doctor with a shake of his head. "Killing a girl would be cruel! I was going to keep her, but not because I LIKE HER! That's crazy! I wanted a permenant prisoner!" said Ethan with a red face. "How she got tortured by Snakes, stripped, and now you want to make her live like that forever instead of ending her now worthless life now? You are crueler than cruel! She is just a really cute blonde! She is a toy!" said the doctor laughing as he aproached Holly's limp body. Understanding what he wanted Ethan grabbed Holly and hid her head against his shirt. "You shall not harm her without my say!" said Ethan then he slumped into a seat and out Holly on his knees. "What are you doing? Oh I know! You really do like her! You must have developed some feelings for her! Oh that's sweet Ethan. Too bad you killed her!" cackled the doctor. Ethan literally kicked him out the came back to watch Holly "I can't like her! She is a captive and she loathes me! But she is pretty! Also pretty strong hearted for a rich snob. No! She is a captive and that is all! But I did kill her. The doctor was right... he was cruel. This capturing a girl thing seemed to be diffrent then shooting a struggling and cursing man then creating a ransom." Maybe he should accept the ransom then give her to his father who would be able to afford the best doctors in the state. But that would mean he might get caught and Holly knew a lot that would be dangerouse to be let out. He started debating with himself and all the time he watched Holly, who was stilll slumped on his knees with closed eyes and a distressed look on her face. Back home Holly's father had already called Holly's older sister who was at law school at the moment. She had rushed home immediatly and tried helping the accountants find the amount of money her father had left in the bank. HIs insurance had caused a lot of the problem it seemed. Then there was the bunch of crimes he did not commit. He had payed for fifty lawyers. He was also sued for the crimes so the lawyers did no good. Eventually Holly's sister called her dad. "You've been robbed!" Holly's father was startled "By who?" he asked. Holly's siter sighed and said "Your accountants have been lieng to you! There have been no crimes, you have not been sued, and you don't even have an insurance. They have beem taking your money and acting as if they were paying expences and used it for themselves. When I figured that out I was with them. After accusing them one hit me with a heavy book and while I was out they hastily tied my legs and hands then ran off. It took me a while but a untied myself but they have escaped!" Her father was startled. "Good news is you still have ten million dollars in your bank account," said Holly's sister. "Then I can pay the ransom!" cried the father relieved not even caring that almost all his fortune was gone. Mr.Diamonds immediatly sent an email to the mysteroiuse sender of the ransom. Back at the lair Ethan had decided to call a doctor. He would pay him to keep quiet but when he went to his laptop he saw he had an email. Mr Diamonds had accpeted the ransom! This put Ethan in more of a bum than ever. If he really loved Holly he would let her go free. He would also get some nice amount of money. Perhaps Holly would see him as he saw her and he would be safe from bieng discovered or maybe not. But he was a villan. Couldn't he just keep Holly? It's what a villan who digged someone would do. He knew he would still get a doctor. He wanted in Holly in good shape weather she left or stayed. He wrote back an email saying I will decide. Now he was beeging to feel horrible. A doctor came and after inspecting Holly he asked "I know who you are. You have put this girl through a lot. I will keep quiet since I have no choice but I really loathe you with every bone of my body for what you did to this young lady. These pills should help. They are exclusive but I have them ready. If you want her to get better you must also feed her properly and try not the torture her for the next week or two. Since your trying to revive her I suppose you do not plan to kill her but if you do keep her she cannot be dramatically tortured or kept hungry. Now I must be going before I become angry and brave enough to go to the police," said the doctor with a sad look. "Wait! I want to pay you for the pills and for your service," said Ethan with a red face. The doctor accepted the money very reluctantly then with one last sad look at Holly he left. Ethan opened Holly's mouth slightly and gave her some water and made her swallow the pill. Then he took her to a room with a sky light and lay her down in a comofrtable bed. Then he put a blanket on her that concelead her entire body except her neck and head. Next to the bed was a nightstand and on it he put two bottles of water and a large breakfest. He got out of the room and stared at Holly "What will I do with you?' he asked her and the locked the door. It was hard to say who was more heartbroken Ethan who loved Holly, Holly when stripped and whipped, or Holly's father when he recieved Ethan's two emails. And all the night Ethan was restless in bed unable to sleep. He thought he was imaging somebody crying from next door but then it stopped before he could think about it. He kept on remembering the look of Holly's face when she did not agree to the video for the ransom and the look of her face when she had been imprisoned first, at his new house, and in the freezer. Somehow he wished he had neveer met her.