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Kidnapped in Broad Daylight

Novel By: VerticusTheFirstWerewolf
Mystery and crime

A teenage outcast gets taken by a psychotic kidnapper in school. She forgets to take her medication for diabetes and she gets really tired and sick. Now the clock is ticking for her life as a FBI agent tries to save her life. View table of contents...


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Submitted:Aug 26, 2010    Reads: 299    Comments: 4    Likes: 1   

Kidnapped in Broad Daylight


"Maddie, Maddie. Hey, Maddie time to wake up sweetie. Your going to be late for school." Maddie's mom said from the stairs. "Uh........mmn...... Fine, I am up." Maddie yelled to her mom. Maddie gets up from her bed. Maddie is 5'4 3/4", slim, shoulder- length layered dark brown hair with bangs, green, brown, little grey hazel eyes, she is not popular, and a nice personality. Maddie grabs some clothes from her drawer and closet. She heads to her bathroom. She turns on the shower and she goes to the mirror. She looks at herself in the mirror and doesn't like what she sees. She mutters to herself, " Man, oh, man. I guess you are what they say, sighs, a freak." She thinks maybe the ritual of showering will calm her down. She undresses and jumps in the shower. After about 10 minutes, she gets out to get dressed.

She opens her mirror cabinet and takes out a pair of scissors. She closes the cabinet door. She walks to her toilet and sits on it. She extends her wrists out and takes the scissors to her wrists. She makes a neat little slice on her wrists. Tears are screaming from her eyes. She grabs a towel to clean up the blood that was trickling down.She looks at her old scars on her wrists and she looks sad. She askes herself why can't I be a normal human being for once.

She puts her black wrists bands on. She walks to her mirror and puts on black eyeshadow, black eyeliner, and black mascara on. She looks in the mirror and she is wearing a black RED hard rock band baby tee under a fish-net tank top, black rockstar jeans, and Red by Mark Eco tennis shoes. She combs her hair and blow dries it. She puts two braids in her hair. She checks herself in the mirror and she walks out the bathroom. She gathers her things and puts them in her backpack. She swings her backpack around her shoulder. She walks out of her room and goes down the stairs. She heads towards the kitchen.

"Hey, honey. Grab some breakfast before you head off to school." Maddie's mom said to her when Maddie grabs a poptart out of the cupboard. Maddie's mom has blond hair, she is 5'8", slim, and green eyes. Her mom works as a model for Vogue magazine. Her mom's name is Sandi Gunther. Her dad walks in and kisses her mom on the lips. He says, " Good morning honey. Good morning, Maddie and Joshua." He goes to the coffee pot and makes himself some coffee. Maddie's dad works as a lawyer in Los Angeles, California. Sometimes he is home and sometimes he is not. He is athletic, 6'1", brown eyes, dark brown short hair,and has a protective instinct towards his famliy. His name is David Gunther."Good morning, baby." Sandi said as she is flipping egg whites in a frying pan.

"Good morning, dad." Joshua said as he was checking his songs out on his I-Pod touch at the kitchen table. Joshua is Maddie's one year older brother. He is 5'10", dark blond hair, athletic, green and brown eyes, and he is popular. "Good morning, dad. Josh can we go to school now. Please, NOW!!!!!!!" Maddie said and looked mad at him. "Ok. Geez, what the hell is your problem?" Joshua said and look at her all shockly. "Ok, ok we'll go." Joshua said while getting up. "Hold on, Maddie did you take your medicine this morning? You know how you get with your diabetes." Sandi said and looked at her daughter. " I will mom. Ok. Love you." Maddie said and kissed her mom. She went up and kissed her dad on the cheek and said, "Love you, too dad. See yah guys laters."

She walks towards the fridge and takes her medicine out. She stuffs it in her bag. Joshua and her walk out the door towards his 2010 Chevrolet Camero in a golden yellow color. They got to school and got out.Their high school is really big. It has four stories, four classrooms of the same subject, a dome, a gigantic cafeteria, and a student's lounge. Their high school is called Georgeton High School. Maddie was about to walk inside the building when Kelsey blocked her way. "Hey, there you are freak. I thought you wouldn't show up." Kelsey said and started laughing at her and so did her friends. Kelsey is a cheerleading captain. Kelsey is 5'6", has dark red hair, blue eyes, athletic, and she thinks she is higher than everybody else.

Maddie tried to find a way out but Kelsey grabbed her by the hair and slammed her against the wall. "Not so fast, mutt. Where do you think your going? Are you trying to escape?" Kelsey said mockily. "Nnnnooo." Maddie managed to say it without showing fear. "Good. Now let's deal with this now, shall we?" Kelsey said and punched Maddie in the stomach. Maddie dropped. "Come on, Kelesy leave her alone." Bridgett said. Bridgett is Kelsey's best-friend. Bridgette is dark skinned, beautiful brown and golden eyes, black curly hair, and 5'9". She has a nice personality but it doesnt come to that when she hangs out with Kelsey. "Fine. You just got lucky, freak." Kelsey said. Her friends and her started walking away. Maddie is still holding her stomach. She gets up and starts walking inside the building.

She goes up to her locker and opens it. She takes her medication out of her bag and she puts it on top shelf of her locker. She closes her locker door. She walks to her first class, Biology. She goes up to a seat in the back row. "So, class,can anybody tell what the Cell theory is?" Mr. Branch said as he just walked into class. Mr. Branch is 6'0", brown short hair, brown eyes, athletic, and he is determined to teach his kids about Biology without boring them.

Twelve people in the class raised their hands. Mr. Branch looks around and says, "Maddie, can you tell me what is a Cell Theory." Maddie gets up." A Cell theory states that the cell is the fundamental unit of life, and that all living things are composed of one or more cells or the secreted products of those cells (e.g. shells). All cells arise from other cells through cell division. In multicellar organisms, every cell in the organism's body derives ultimately from a single cell in a fertilized egg. The cell is also considered to be the basic unit in many pathological processes. Additionally, the phenomenon of energy flow occurs in cells in processes that are part of the function known as metabolism. Finally, cells contain hereditary information (DNA) which is passed from cell to cell during cell division." Maddie said.

"Well, done Maddison. A-plus for you." Mr. Branch said. " That is because she is teacher's pet." Kelsey remarked. Everyone of Kelsey's friend started laughing except Bridgett. "Kelsey, that was uncalled for." Mr. Branch snapped. "Ok, class we'll have to pick up later on this. Your homework aggisnment tonight is to read chapter 12 sections 3 and 4. Do the study quetions and write me a one page essay on what you have read." Mr. Branch said. The bell rang and everybody jumped up out of their seats and walked out the door. Maddie waited till the hallway was clear and she went to her locker. Before, she opened the her locker door a hand grabbed her by the throat and held her. She screamed. He grabbed a knife and held it to her thoart. The principal walked by and stopped. He had a look of fear in his eyes. Like he reconized him.

" Back the fuck away, Mr. Garcia." the stranger said. "Kal, what are you doing here. Kal, let her go. Please, let her go? What did she do to you?" Mr. Garcia pleaded. Mr. Garcia is 5'9 1/2", he is a little chubby, and has brown eyes. Maddie was muffling and crying. The kids in the other rooms heard the commotion and they went outside to look. Joshua saw his sister with the guy. The teachers, secretary, treasurer, and the janitor tried to help Mr. garcia out. But then Kal, said " Back off or I'll shoot him and then I'll kill her." Kal was a student at Georton High. He ws also an outcast. He killed people for a living for money. He is 6'4", has blue eyes, long dark brown hair, and musclar.


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