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Have you ever waited to die? To end all misery? View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Jun 16, 2008    Reads: 62    Comments: 2    Likes: 2   


What a day for trouble.

What a life for fear.

Here I sit alone,

And wait for another tear.

I wait for a chance to come out,

But all I do is wait.

I am afraid to see and hear,

Their voice and eyes so sneared.

All I do is run and hide,

But I still don't get the point,

I am not violent or worthless,

But all I do is wait.

I stayed alone,

Let the door barred shut,

And wait for the tears to scramble,

And the rain passes by.

If I were in so much trouble,

Why is there no trouble?

Why did I bang my head on the wall,

to let the blood pour down?

If there is all I ever have?

Then let this get over with.

With a click of pistol

What's more to wait?


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Comments:

Very nice poem scaza :).

You detail and explain the narrator's pain very well. Also, the rhyme is handled very well. Great job!

Regan

Posted: Jun 23, 2008

Author Comment:

thank you.

I really enjoy this. It's real, not like some stuff I've read. Very nice!

Posted: Sep 15, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you!!!:)



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