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Cry but dont say goodbye

Poem By: Shadowstep
Mystery and Crime


People die and go but death stays View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Jul 23, 2008    Reads: 81    Comments: 4    Likes: 2   


A Woman says a woman cries all of this is just a lie

people kill people die and i just say the word goodbye

i come to here angry as thee, gods plan isnt free

so dont cry about the lost or who had a killing spree

you love you hate but do you appreciate your destiny

i love i hate but i cant be free

i want to know i want to see what death will bring to me

angry as i, i leave her be

as i tell her dont cry, my dagger stabs her in the eye

i am death and this is your destiny

her blood seeps down the alley

i kiss her on the cheeck and say goodbye


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good its wonderful.............keep the good work

Posted: Jul 25, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanx

hi! s. u've shown the morbidity of death in all its openness. this is dark and deadly. enjoyed it thoroughly. lol. ;-)

Posted: Jul 28, 2008

Author Comment:

thanx for the boost, i really appreciate that

HOLY! OMG! i loved it! great to see another horror writer here!

Posted: Aug 4, 2008

WOW! That's really good! I'd love to read more of your writing! =)
~Maple

Posted: Aug 5, 2008



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