Submitted: Nov 5, 2007
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Stop them,
thundering the gates,
locking the chains,
stop them,
oh no, don't breathe
suddenly, everything
and all that I see,
will disappear as I close
as i pause,
as they pull me,
as they come near me...
i lose air,
i lose you...
to whom am I now to love
if they just turn me into a dove
blindfolded,
without you
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Comments:
This is so amazing and powerful "Would you stop slicing my hands?" "Kiss my heart longer" just great lines
Posted: Nov 5, 2007
Lionheart
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Very powerful piece! Strong feelings of helplessness and frustration seen very clearly. Great job, its a good poem!
Posted: Dec 29, 2007