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Submitted: Nov 5, 2007    Reads: 94    Comments: 2    Likes: 4   


Stop them,

thundering the gates,

locking the chains,

stop them,

oh no, don't breathe

suddenly, everything

and all that I see,

will disappear as I close

as i pause,

as they pull me,

as they come near me...

i lose air,

i lose you...

to whom am I now to love

if they just turn me into a dove

blindfolded,

without you

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Comments:

This is so amazing and powerful "Would you stop slicing my hands?" "Kiss my heart longer" just great lines

Posted: Nov 5, 2007

Author Comment:

thank you very much^^

Lionheart
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Very powerful piece! Strong feelings of helplessness and frustration seen very clearly. Great job, its a good poem!

Posted: Dec 29, 2007

Author Comment:

thanks a lot ! keep on reading ^_^



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