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I dont really know how to summarize it because it isnt finished yet. but if you have some suggestions, please let me know about them.


Submitted:Jul 3, 2010    Reads: 58    Comments: 0    Likes: 0   


INT. LOBBY OF FANCY APARTMENT BUILDING- EVENING


A glass table with a fern plant on top in the middle of the lobby. Fancy glass chandelier hanging above the fern. The light shining through the window is shining on a key on the table.


The desk clerk is putting the mail in all the mail slots for the apartments' tenants to get. He comes to one of the letters addressed to "Mr. Shaun Gates". He puts the letter into slot number 123.


Two men walk into the lobby through the spinning doors talking about something that happened earlier that day. They suddenly stop walking and stare at the desk clerk putting the mail away.


Joel Franklin is normal height, skinny, brown hair, brown eyes, and fair looking. Shaun Gates is very tall, blond hair, blue eyes, and very handsome. Both wearing nice blue suits, looking as if they are just coming home from work.


SHAUN
(whispering to Joel)
Lets scare him before he sees us.


JOEL
Sounds good.


Shaun and Joel quietly sneak over to the desk clerk while he is grabbing the mail.


SHAUN AND JOEL
BOO!


The desk clerk throws the mail in the air and jumps so high he could've touched the ceiling.


DESK CLERK
JESUS CHRIST! You guys need to stop doing that to me!


SHAUN
You just need to lighten up, Andy.


Shaun grabs his mail out of his mail slot and looks through it real quick and throws away the magazines and junk mail and keeps the bills. Shaun and Joel walk past Andy and walk up the stairs to Shauns' apartment. Room #123 They get to the door and there is a note hanging there addressed to "SHAUN GATES". He grabs the note before Joel can see it. He unlocks the door and they both walk into the apartment.

INT. CUT BACK TO LOBBY OF APARTMENT BUILDING- EVENING


Yvonne Dunn walks into the lobby to get her mail from the mail slots. She walks over to the glass table and looks through her mail.
Yvonne has beautiful long blond hair, brown eyes, and perfect is in almost every way.


Aria Williams, long brown hair, a little short in height, pretty girl, walks into the lobby after Yvonne.


Yvonne looks up and sees Aria. They give each other a friendly look. Aria walks past the mail slots and stands next to Yvonne.


ARIA
Hey, Yvonne.


YVONNE
Oh hey aria. What's up?


ARIA
Nothing much. Can I talk to you in private?


YVONNE
Uhhhhh. Yeah, sure. I'll come to your apartment in a little. Is that good?


ARIA
Yeah. That's Fine. See you then.


Aria starts walking away and drops something but doesn't notice. Aria walks up the stairs and disappears.


Yvonne finishes sorting her mail and recycles the mail she doesn't want anymore. She sees that Aria has dropped something but doesn't know what it is. It looks like an important document but the writing is in a language she doesn't recognize.


Yvonne picks it up and starts walking to her room while trying to figure out what this thing is.


She gets to her room. Unlocks the door and walks in.


INT. YVONNES' APARTMENT- NO LIGHTS ARE ON. ALL THE SHADES ARE SHUT. SHE WALKS OVER TO THE LIGHT SWITCH AND TURNS THE LIGHTS ON. YOU SEE THE BACK OF A NICE LOOKING COUCH AND SOME TABLES AND LAMPS AND A FLAT SCREEN TV AND CHAIRS AND A COFFEE TABLE. THERE ARE MAGAZINES ALL OVER THE FLOOR. SHE TURNS TO THE LEFT AND WALKS INTO THE KITCHEN AND TURNS THE LIGHTS ON. STAINLESS STEEL APPLIANCES.


Yvonne sets the paper on the counter and walks into the living room and turns on the lamps. She walks over to the phone to check her messages. No messages.
She walks into her bedroom and changes into a laid back look. a plain white T-shirt and jeans.


She goes back to the kitchen and the paper is gone...


YVONNE
(worried)
Hello? Is there anyone here? Hello? Where are you? Come out and show yourself!


No one answers and she stands there for a minute. She walks to the front door, looks back into the apartment to make sure no one else is there and walks out.
She triple checks to make sure the door is locked before she leaves.





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