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A short story-Return Of the Water Elements

Short story By: idan234
Mystery and crime

A short mystery story.

Submitted:Jan 31, 2013    Reads: 54    Comments: 0    Likes: 0   

It was a dark rainy night, Mizu just returned home from his work, he walked at the down street to his house, the street was quiet and no one walked there, the street was full with puddles, Mizu was at the half way home when the rain stoped,after a couple of minutes after the rain stoped he heard a sound behind him, he looked behind him but didn't see anything,after a few steps he heard the noise again he looked behind him but didn't see anything expect a water movement at one of the puddles,he kept walking and after a couple of minutes he heard the noise again but this time the noise was louder,he felt like someone was following him,he looked behind him again and saw water movement in all of the puddles behind him, he stared at them for a second and then heard another noise from the other side, he looked to the other side with a terrified look and a car past by him with great speed, Mizu steped back with a terrified feeling and dropped his umbrella from his hand , after a second he laughed and turned around to pick his umbrella, when he turned around the water at the puddles were shaking and it looked as they were raising up from the puddles, the water turned into a shape and it looked as the waters were turning into a woman shape, the woman screamed and Mizu screamed as well with a terrified heart stopping scream.
The day after this Mizu wife had reported him missing since he didn't returned from his work the night before, Mizu wife posted his picture in the newspaper asking for information, the day after this a man knocked at her door saying he have information about her husband, the man say that the day before he saw a man at the Mizon lake that answer for her husband photowhile jogging, the man said he saw him at the lake bank starring at the lake,the man stopped to tie his shoes not far away and after he finished he started to jogging to the way he came from and he saw her husband with half of his body already in the lake, the man ran to stop him but he has already vanished into the water.

The police had sent diving teams to the lake to look for his body but after a whole search at the lake his body wasn't found and his dying reason were decided as suicide, with agony and misery from her husband death, Mizu wife commited suicide the some mystrious way her husband did and both of there bodies were never found.


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