A cryptic man seeks revenge for what she's done. View table of contents...

Submitted: Sep 2, 2008    Reads: 38    Comments: 2    Likes: 1   

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Miiichelle

I like harsh critisism. tell me what you think!

Posted: Sep 2, 2008

miranda
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it's cool. but why did he kill her???? i don't understand??? but it was way awesome and harsh.

Posted: Sep 2, 2008

Author Comment:

yeah! that's exactly the reaction i wanted haha. I'm thinking of making this short story into a novel, you can find out then. :)

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