This Short-Story center's around the Seven teen year old neah heartnet who solves variou's types of crimes. Neah now has to solve the mystorius letter he got disappearance of the Servant George. Atempted murder of the maid Helen And the mysterious code left behind by the 88 year old Dead owner of...
| Updated Jul 8, 2011
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I'm writing a suspense book in the " Murder Mystery Club" form; a group of people telling each other curios crimes they witnessed. The below story is imbedded into the frame story. Please tell me what you think of it?
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If you were told that you could have one chance to live your life from the very beginning, erase all of your mistakes and change your life as you know it, would you take it? What if that meant you had to live with the consequences?
On Francines sixteenth birthday, he gets an unexpected visit from...
| Updated Jul 2, 2011
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Kai Yamazaki, a myterious 30-year-old man, is minding his own business when he runs into a man with a sneaky look in his eyes. After both men pass ways Kai realizes his phone is missing. When he gets home, he calls his number and the guy who bumped into him answers. Kai beggs to have the phone re...