I'm writing a suspense book in the " Murder Mystery Club" form; a group of people telling each other curios crimes they witnessed. The below story is imbedded into the frame story. Please tell me what you think of it?
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If you were told that you could have one chance to live your life from the very beginning, erase all of your mistakes and change your life as you know it, would you take it? What if that meant you had to live with the consequences?
On Francines sixteenth birthday, he gets an unexpected visit from...
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Kai Yamazaki, a myterious 30-year-old man, is minding his own business when he runs into a man with a sneaky look in his eyes. After both men pass ways Kai realizes his phone is missing. When he gets home, he calls his number and the guy who bumped into him answers. Kai beggs to have the phone re...
This a story of a battle between two great enemies. Salvia who kiddnapped and experimented on poor little Rose. He tried to use her as one of his minions but she was able to snap out of his control and fight back. But during their fierce battle Salviar brought up a terrible past of Rose's that sh...
A man walks into a bar, his hands smelling of bleach. All he wants is a drink and an alibi, but what he gets is an encounter with a loud, old man. As they talk he realizes they share a very personal and very dangerous link.
A short story for fans of Dark, edgy and Noir fiction.