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A colourful moving road

Short story By: PinkRosey9
Mystery and crime

James was walking in scot field park untill he see's a moving colourful road. What is happening? he finds himself in a grave and he finds something wrong with him...Whats wrong with James?

Submitted:Jan 5, 2013    Reads: 58    Comments: 5    Likes: 2   

I was walking , I did't know where I was , but the last time I remember I was at scot field park. I'm sure I was there but now I'm not 100% sure.

I was at a colourful moving road which had moving patterns, It kept making me dizzy. Firstly I thought I was hypnotizebut I don't think so . I'm sure it's just a dream, once I wake up it will all just disappear...

Now what this ? I think I'm in a grave...

As I shook the box I finally decided to open itthenIfound my mum crying and dressed in black.My mum looked at me in horror, the priest held up the bible and started to say ''Stay away spirit and I will not hurt you!''. I couldn't beileve they thought I was a devil or someting. Then my mum said ''stop!''she also said ''come here my child''. At least my mum knew I wasn't a spirit, She came to me and huged me like I haven't been with her for ages. I asked her how she knew I wasn't a spirit, she said she knew I wasn't because I had a necklace which said ''THE BIBLE'' in big letters. After I said so what if I had it on,then she huffed and exclaimed that spirits are scared of god and the bible. The priest said sorry and welcomed me back, I said no need to say so sorry and I went home with my mum.

When I got home I went sleep because I got sick of all those coments. My mum always interrupted and asked me if I wanted anything and also ,said she will buy a x box for my welcome back present.LOL! she went mad and cooked everything we had, so on saturday we have to go shopping.

Mum and me went to ASDA to buy food, she also went mad in ADSA, she kept buying stuff we don't need. I felt weird and told my mum, she said we should go to the doctors, but I said there wasn't time for the doctors, but she didn't listen to me and we went to the doctors if I liked it or not.

When the doctor looked at my body he couldn't see anything wrong but then he looked closer and sawa tragic thing. He talked to me and mum in a sadway and said ''Your son has no heart''...


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