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MY WEEKLY TOP 10 (4): (may 11 - 17, 2008)

Book Review By: bubbly
Non-Fiction


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Submitted: May 11, 2008    Reads: 119    Comments: 36    Likes: 18   


My weekly top 10 (4): (may 11 – 17, 2008)
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1. BROOKE GROSS – the silver band
2. VAHNDELFIRE – why mommy why
3. MIDRIFFKITTY – enter my mind
4. GHIRADELLI GIRL – jack frost
5. PREPPRINCESS – beautiful new life
6. SAIF WASIULLAH – titles of chapters of holy quran (I-VI)
7. ALICE OISEAU – the day the music died
8. MICHAEL68 – the haunting
9. MURDEROUSSWEETTART – grotesque soul
10. MOGGIEDOG – Africa the other side
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Poet of the week – DONNA
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Top reviewers – STEVE RITTER, MICHAEL CHRISTOPHER
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BROOKE GROSS – She is a regular girl, writing regular stuff. A heart-warming story, “The silver band” stresses on forgiveness (a quality people appreciate but hardly ever find). Ami is soon to be wedded to Brice but a week before wedding, Brice decides otherwise. What will Ami do, will they ever meet. Will she forgive, rather forget Brice.
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VAHNDELFIRE – Cody Brown for you and me. Just 19, his writing shows maturity that will find him huge readership. “Why mommy why” may not be a mother’s day gift, but one can reflect on what mothers are capable of doing. It starts well and you suspect the father but father is the ultimate victim. Read on
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MIDRIFFKITTY – (Wow! What a name!) What happens when you want to share your innermost feelings. You lay bare your heart and also your soul. And the reader gets to see the raw core. By no means, it’s a raw deal. And Madame M’s “Enter my mind” tells us a tale of gritty survival. (Don’t mix it up with Survivor on TV). Enjoy it for what it offers.
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GHIRADELLI GIRL – Only 14 and bursting with youthful enthusiasm. A familiar name with an amazing writing portfolio. We should look at the world from her eyes. And “jack frost” becomes a reality. A season ends and another is born. Should we grieve about the gone or welcome the new with open arms. Worth a find.
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PREPPRINCESS – My understanding of religion is it is personal. I don’t discuss religion and politics. But this week Prep and Saif (sort of) changed my perception. “Beautiful new life” tells us about spring, a season of change, just like Jesus gave up his life to bring a change for us. This one is truly a gift.
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SAIF WASIULLAH – He had asked me to comment on his poem, “Titles of chapters of holy quran (I – VI)”. I was apprehensive. One must have mastery over language to achieve what he has done. It is poetry in motion. It is not a religious text but literary craftsmanship, not easily achieved. And rhyming is incredible. 2 poets – 2 religions – 2 perspectives – INTERESTING
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ALICE OISEAU – Here is Alice and she too needs no introduction. She may not consider herself to be writing well. And she comes up with “the day the music died”. This doesn’t seem like fiction – it is like a page out of her personal diary. If she considered Kevin, her friend, to be music, lot of us will miss him at the end of this touching tale.
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MICHAEL68 – Well, well, Mikey is simple, straightforward and hugely likable guy. Some people are made that way. It’s a way of life with him. And so I didn’t expect “Haunting” from him. But then you never know what a writer can do the next moment and what is going on in his mind. This one gave me goose pimples.
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MURDEROUSSWEETTART – Beware! She is murderous, she is sweet and she is a.… I was reflecting after reading her “Grotesque soul”. The world classifies us - good, bad or ugly. People make our lives difficult with their negative or destructive opinions. So should we follow what we like or be “classified”. Madame M, although hurt, decides for herself.
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MOGGIEDOG – I haven’t been to South Africa, except on Internet. But Moggiedog’s “Africa - the other side” shows us a side that may turn away the tourists. But Moggiedog says, to hell with that. She wants to have her way. She wants to hit where it hurts. So it’s a read from start to finish. South Africa, from Moggiedog’s pen.
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Poet of the week – DONNA – Try as I may, I can’t place her on a numbered list. She’ll be on the first flight from Zimbabwe to Canada to spank me. She’s almost childlike, (All kids, please take note.) I was wondering whether she was here as a reader for networking alone. Until she opened her score with “dream lover” this week. Hope she’s not reading this or she’ll say, “I’m no. 1”.
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Top reviewers - STEVE RITTER, MICHAEL CHRISTOPHER – Soon you will get to know them better. When they comment, you know that this is what your work deserves. Most of the time you will end up loving their comments more than your own work.
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(US elections are a few months away. We can enjoy a few jokes until then. Rest as we all know, after elections, we will be back to crying until another election dawns.)
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A few days after George W. Bush's win, a man came up to the uniformed Marine on duty at the White House and said, "I'd like to see President Clinton.”
The Marine, "Sir, Mr. Clinton is no longer president."
The man said, "Oh, OK" and walked away.
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The next day the Marine was again on duty and the same man approached and again asked to see President Clinton.
The Marine again answered, "Sir, Mr. Clinton is no longer president."
Again the man answered, "Oh, OK" and walked away.
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Next day the same man approached the same Marine and again asked to see President Clinton.
Marine is annoyed, "Sir, I've told u, Mr. Clinton is no longer president. Don't u understand that?"
"Yes, I do", said the man, "But I just enjoy hearing it."
The Marine smiled and said, "See you again tomorrow."
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until next week...CHEERS!... and lots of luv and kisses...and...and...(I said SHUT UP!!!)
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Ciao


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Comments:

Reviews are important for understanding the authors and their writings. It's a twin treat now.

Posted: May 11, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! robotic. thanx. ur names seems mechanical but ur comment is so warm. u double my pleasure. ;-)

aw thank you bubbly! i loved the way you described my story the day the music died. "a page from my own personal diary" thank you so much!

Posted: May 11, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! alice. invite more readers to this work. its good. ;-)

Hellow Bubbles. You sure do hate me. I didn't find my name on no. 1. How could you do this to me. Now come to Zimbabwe and I'll spank you. Ha Ha. Place me anywhere or don't place me. I know you know I am always there wishing you well. So I'm the poet of the week, hmm.

Posted: May 11, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! donna, u've all the makings of a good melodramatic actress. try hollywood. ;-)

Good thing you started reviewing. Now I can put the authors in perspective. Its a total picture now. The joke is the icing on the cake.

Posted: May 11, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! listener. this is the whole point. this is time consuming and looks a lot of stuff. i'll decide appropriately. this is my fav joke. and each time i read it i laugh again. thanx. ;-)

Oh my gosh Bubbly!!!!!!!! You are sooooooooo sweet! Thanks for the recognition-- like really! I didn't even know you liked my stuff that much-- thank you a million ka-trillion times over^_^!

Lot's of special chocolate to you,

Ghiradelli Girl:).

Posted: May 11, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! gg. thanx. enjoy while the going is good. ;-)

Wonderful reviews, bubbly.

Posted: May 11, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! susan. i'm so happy u r here. you double my treat. ;-)

Wonderful review and thanks for the nice things that you said. You made me smile. I really appreciate it my friend. :)

Posted: May 11, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! mikey. u make me humbled. pleasure is all mine. ;-)

Booooooo! There are no brilliant writers here, and I work hard every week, and I still don't get reviewed! This sucks! It's favouritism!...eh?

Your's truly...Don Vito Corleone.

Posted: May 12, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! don. so many people r ur fans. they like ur work. three cherrs. ;-)

Thanks for letting me be on the top ten.

Posted: May 12, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! loliee, pleasure is mine. keep writing. ;-)

Could you please bring it out on Monday as I sleep on Sunday. But I want to be the first to comment. Now I find so many have already commented. Why mommy why tears my heart.

Posted: May 12, 2008

Author Comment:

sunday is the only day it'll come out. sleep well. ;-)

Could you make it top 20. 10 is not enough. When it ended, I was left wanting to read more.

Posted: May 12, 2008

Author Comment:

thanx. ;-)

You are the top reviewer. This is what I gather from the list. This must be a lot of hard work. Do keep up this. A pleasure to read.

Posted: May 12, 2008

Author Comment:

thanx. ;-)

This is one spot where I can gather the best and find new authors too. Booksie is getting so big that it is not possible to go through all. Cheers to you.

Posted: May 12, 2008

Author Comment:

thanx. ;-)

It'd be a good idea to bring out a kids list. Kids like loliee11 write so well. And jack frost too is good. Think about it.

Posted: May 12, 2008

Author Comment:

thanx. ;-)

I am still not over last list and I find the new one. My hands are full. Seriously, this will help you develop as a critic. Nice work.

Posted: May 12, 2008

Author Comment:

thanx. ;-)

For little over a year, I was interacting with my internet friend. This weekend, I went to meet her personally and saw her family too. And now I see me in your list. I don't know, what should be I more happy about.

Posted: May 12, 2008

Author Comment:

BOTH. ;-)

This is a wonderful idea, Bubbly. You hit the nail right on the head. Far out.

Posted: May 12, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! a. thanx. i'm glad u liked it. ;-)

Wow! I'm really honored to be on this list! Thank you so much! I am truly flattered.

Posted: May 13, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! brooke. thanx. keep writing well and many more honors'll be on ur way. yo! ;-)

This has the stamp of CLASS. Way to go.

Posted: May 13, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! phantom. thanx. but u r REAL, right! the class lies with u, the work with me. ;-)

I am not certain what to appreciate more - the review or the writers and their prose. You excel. Particularly the Murderoussweettart one.

Posted: May 13, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! choc. thanx. u must read these works and after that can relate to my review. for that is the purpose - to read these works. ;-)

I love the idea of a weekly top ten. It gives us all the chance to read some great work that we may otherwise never get the chance too. I'll definately be chiking this out every week;)
Steph:)

Posted: May 13, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! steph. thanx. this is just to encourage new and lesser known writers along with established ones. could u let me know what new can i write about the established ones, which the reader doesn't know already. ;-)

Keep it up.

Posted: May 14, 2008

Author Comment:

thanx. ;-)

I am getting a professional read. This makes it look neat.

Posted: May 14, 2008

Author Comment:

thanx. ;-)

Keep playing the music.

Posted: May 14, 2008

Author Comment:

thanx. ;-)

Top Top Top

Posted: May 14, 2008

Author Comment:

thanx. ;-)

Although I love Steph dearly, I have to disagree and say to you go fuck yourself as your list is bullshit and narrow minded as you only look for shit that entertains you. One dimensional donkey brain motherfucker. Eat shit and die insect.

Posted: May 15, 2008

Author Comment:

u r drunk when u wrote this. when u become sober, remember, ur chapter is over on my page. period.

Eric. Don't ever write to me again. You have crossed all limits of profanities and decency on a public platform where children and others read commonly. I had earlier warned you politely. But you are making a mess on someone's page, that'll embarass a lot. I don't know what you think of yourself, just go to hell. Don't visit our pages again. Be careful.

Posted: May 15, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! donna. thanx but i can handle things. ;-)

whisper
(not registered user)

Eric came here searching for his sex fix but was fixed. His language is cheap and avoidable.

Posted: May 16, 2008

Author Comment:

excuse me! thanx but no thanx. ;-)

excuse me! thanx but no thanx. ;-)

Posted: May 16, 2008

whisper
(not registered user)

My daughter a teenager is on booksie. This guy uses obscene language 'you are hot you are hot' and was writing suggestive things to her. I gave him a sound thrashing. Now I find he's repeating it here in another way. He should be banned from booksie. He's no good for children.

Posted: May 16, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! whisper. u r welcome to write about my work. but i'm not interested in any issues. please take up ur matter with the concerned person. i'm sad ur daughter underwent this. i hope she doesn't undergo it any further. thanx, anyways.

hi! whisper. u r welcome to write about my work. but i'm not interested in any issues. please take up ur matter with the concerned person. i'm sad ur daughter underwent this. i hope she doesn't undergo it any further. thanx, anyways.

Posted: May 16, 2008

Thomas
(not registered user)

This guy is sick in head. He needs to seek medical advice immediately. Rather admit him to a mental hospital.

Posted: May 16, 2008

Author Comment:

this topic is closed for good. please use my page for discussing my work etc. or any other interesting thing. thanx

Ok I'm not defending what Eric did becouse it was wrong but i will defend him. He was drunk and didnt mean to so just drop it, he siad he was sorry to bubbly so its history now.
oh and bubbly like the way you've done it this time :D
xxx

Posted: May 17, 2008

Author Comment:

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Thanks so much! It means a lot to me to be recognized for my work! It's nice to know that I have support because it will help me write even more great stuff! Love ya! -April~prepPRINCESS

Posted: May 17, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! april. thanx. i wish u well with ur work and recognition. way to go. ;-)

mst
(not registered user)

Thanks for putting me on your top ten for the week! Glad you like that poem. ~MurderousSweetTart

Posted: May 22, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! m. pleasure is entirely mine. thanx. ;-)

Love it.

Posted: Jun 5, 2008

Author Comment:

hi! tintin. thanx. ;-)



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