My Weekly Top 10 (101): (nov 29 - dec 05, 2009)
1. youngwriter - wrong impression
2. XbrokenHeartedX - i'm sorry I hurt
3. dmlmex - no heart left
4. elenamiria - a flashlight without
5. J Anthony King - leaving school but not leaving
6. julistar - light me up
7. BekahBoo - saying the unthinkable
8. raindown - memory of the river…
9. lol123 - nothing ever more
10. Nita Eads - meeting at the beach
youngwriter - You know, first impressions are
not always the best impressions. Being at the wrong place at the
wrong time is equally bad. Youngwriter in her
poem "wrong impression" had met a guy
when she was tired and not in mood. He was cross and she was
angry. She yelled at him. He was worried about something. She
wants to apologize now. Can they be FRIENDS?
XbrokenHeartedX - If youngwriter can apologize,
can Zoe be left behind? Its very sweet of anyone
to say sorry. That's the beauty about this word. It simply charms
the other. She in her poem "i'm sorry I hurt
you" had cut herself. (You know, that cut, blade,
cut.) She did not tell her parents. When they came to know, they
were hurt and upset. She said SORRY.
dmlmex - Wow. Some people have a knack for
spreading rumors and driving a wedge between lovers.
Dmlmex faces this dilemma in her poem
"no heart left". She loves a guy
dearly. But people are saying bad things about him. She is in two
minds. But she trusts him and not them. He had promised never to
hurt her. She will go on loving him. Read on.
elenamiria - This is the story of a flashlight.
Can a body be without a soul? Can a flashlight work without a
battery. Elena in her poem "a
flashlight without batteries" brings up the plight
of a flashlight. Once everyone needed it urgently. Now it is old
and not used much. So it has been put up for a garage sale. It is
time to say GOODBYE!
J Anthony King - Leaving school can be sad but
not one's girlfriend. That will be disaster, I guess.
Jak in his poem "leaving school but
not leaving her" read the school leavers notes in
autograph book. They made him smile but soon there were tears in
his eyes. Memories came crowding. His girlfriend Lilly too had
written a note. Love overcomes him. He can never leave her. NEVER
julistar - Well, well. Tell your story without
telling your secret. Juli knows this art by
heart. In her poem "light me up" she
meets her old flame accidentally. In childhood they had shared
passionate moments. They drifted apart. Time brought them
together again. As grown ups, they reflected back. Their feelings
are alive. Intensity never abated. She had thought about him. She
had longed for him. HAA!
BekahBoo - A teenaged girl with unwanted
pregnancy is dreading to tell her parents about it.
BekahBoo in her poem "saying the
unthinkable" has a young girl, who is expecting.
She finally tells about it to her parents. Her mom cries and her
dad enquires. But both are very understanding. Her friend too is
very much concerned. She doesn't want to abort. She may give it
raindown - Childhood has such carefreeness that
can never be found again. Rain brings about this
carefreeness of children in her poem "memory of the
river…". Gypsy children are running towards the
river, where they can splash around happily. They swim like
frogs. Time doesn't matter. Sand covered hands are washed. They
are content in their togetherness. They teach each other. Evening
creeps in. Time to go HOME.
lol123 - Africa has seen poverty. Life is tough
there but children don't complain. It is this tough life that
Layla brings forth in her poem
"nothing ever more". She wants to go to
Africa and live a simple life. When she is hungry, she will eat
anything. Life may be tough there but it is better than the
selfish world she is living in now. WOW!
Nita Eads - Sci-fi stories always are thrilling
especially when there is romance involved. Nita
in her short story "meeting at the
beach" has Brooke and Peter enjoying their day on
beach. They love each other. Brooke later dies in an accident
after giving birth to a boy. Peter then meets Meredith, who is a
replica of Brooke. He is extremely surprised. Who is she? What is
Take care until next week...CHEERS!... and lots of luv and
kisses...and...and...(I said SHUT UP!!!)