My Weekly Top 10 (102): (dec 06 - 12, 2009)
1. Dreamer101 - i need…
2. Tarot - twenty years
3. TheUltimateOverlord - luminarium
4. CanadianIdiot - "i fight!"
5. njonasfan - reality and fantasy
6. A J Emperson - reduppity
7. Kaylynn Brookes - fred
8. matmoo - the vow
9. SnowBunny - words of my father
10. foreveryourgirl123 - lost at sea
Dreamer101 - Our needs drive us to desperation.
The more the needs, even more the desperation.
Dreamer101 tells about the needs in her essay
"i need…". Chloe is a young girl,
uncared and unwanted. Her dad wants $ 200 each month for rent or
he will throw her out. She becomes a sex worker. She is unhappy.
While on her way back home, she meets a PREDATOR!
Tarot - Paying a compliment is best form of
flattery. And I must say, I am suitably humbled. I had written a
flash fiction "Good Bye!". Tarot was quick to
catch on it and produce a worthy reply in his short story
"twenty years". Twenty years of
marriage has the husband is fed up. He lies to his wife that he
is cheating on her. And she…COMPLIMENTARY
TheUltimateOverlord - Two stories are running
parallel in this work. TUO in his novel
"luminarium infinitio" has a young boy
Sam, who wants to kill his cruel father. But before he can do
anything, the father decides to pull the trigger. Rayne, a crook,
holds a powerful rune luminarium infinitio. It fulfills his
commands. He hunts for his prey and kills him. The prey is his
CanadianIdiot - Well, to stand up for one's
rights is the best fight. Others will support you if they feel it
right. But before that you need to support yourself.
CI in his poem ""i
fight!"" stands up to fight for what he considers
right. He fights for humanity and to prove he is right. He does
it to be normal and away from being formal. SELFLESS
njonasfan - We all live between reality and
fantasy. What is truth and what is a lie. What is our life and
what is dream. Njonasfan in her poem
"reality and fantasy" throws light on
the two. The reality is very harsh but the dreams are where she
enjoys most. And the brightest part of dreams is him. And dreams
are what is left with her. ILLUSION
A J Emperson - Drugs never do anybody any good.
Once a dopey, it is the end in life itself. The deadly effects of
drugs can be read starkly in AJ's short story
"reduppity". Riley is a rich spoilt
girl. She comes to a party for no reason at all. She joins card
playing. She wins and is given a new drug reduppity for in
taking. It is FATAL.
Kaylynn Brookes - This one will tickle your
funny-bone. Laughing is good for health. Even better than eating
an apple. Rosie in her poem
"fred" tells about this man, who tries
to write a song. He thinks of various options - length, rhyme,
fast, high or long. Should it be played on guitar or piano? Could
the song make him a star? Undecided, he decides not to write.
matmoo - This is a collection of poems clubbed
together and presented as a bouquet. Matmoo in
his poem "the vow" has nature as his
background. Under the open sky and vast mountains, one sips the
fresh air. One wouldn't mind dying or making a vow. He vows to
ever love her. Nature is open in its raw beauty. And he fell in
love with everything. EXOTIC
SnowBunny - What our parents tell us, we do
obey. At times, parents don't believe us. What can we do then?
Snow in her poem "words of my
father" tells about hr dad's advices to her. He
wanted her to listen and to feel. He wanted her to enjoy life. He
wanted her to believe. He wanted her to be guided to prosperity.
He wanted her to DREAM.
foreveryourgirl123 - Loneliness can be killing,
eh! Especially when there is absolutely no one to look forward
to. foreveryourgirl123 in her poem
"lost at sea" has a young girl, who is
at the brink of life. Loneliness is her pain. She walks into the
sea. Slowly she goes down and down. She remembers her friends and
family. They had cruelly abandoned her. Her pain drowns her.
Take care until next week...CHEERS!... and lots of luv and
kisses...and...and...(I said SHUT UP!!!)