My Weekly Top 10 (103: (dec 13 - 19, 2009)
1. happyangel - my last flight
2. Jbortti - how love is cruel!
3. ezzy - as…i…see…time,
4. Sunset - companion rain
5. jack diamond - diamond- click click
6. suzanne capleton - ramorgra: the toll of
7. sonicstoryteller5 - the rivalry
8. angelxgood - gaara love story
9. deannajoy - what happened?!
10. Twilightangel - broken beauty
happyangel - A dying person has a last wish and
that wish remains unfulfilled. Cruel, eh! Joy
brings a rare sadness in her poem "my last
flight" Death awaits a little girl. She has a wish
- to fly in the sky and that too with wings. She wants to see the
flowers. She wants to dance and sing. She bids goodbye to her
parents. She is just SEVEN!
Jbortti - Hmm. It is true, I guess. There is
pain in love and there is cruelty too if what
Juliano writes in his poem "how love
is cruel!" is true. In his dreams he sees himself
being kissed but he can't touch. It is just impossible. The
atmosphere is romantic. But an eternal promise of him being hers
is there. She too will be his. ROMANTIC
ezzy - If earlier love was cruel, here we find
life is nothing less. Ezzy in her poem
"as…i…see…time," finds herself growing
restless. How will she survive as life has dealt her blows. Times
are not getting any better. Each year is troublesome. She is
losing hope with passing time. Once life was wonderful. She
yearns for those days. Life is painful now but yet she is
Sunset - When rain comes pouring down, how
wonderful it feels to dance and get wet under it. That feeling is
indescribable. Sunset in her poem
"companion rain" uses words to portray
nature. As rain falls down passionately, it sends her into
another world. Her eyes close with pleasure. Her sadness is
washed away. She compares rain with her lover, who cheats and
lies. Rain is faithful COMPANION.
jack diamond - When one is depressed, one can go
to any extremes - even shooting oneself. But here shooting is not
the case. Depression is. Jack in his poem
"diamond- click click" is not crying
for help. He wants to show his pain but is running away from
people. He finds solace in his writing. His fears overwhelm him
and he buckles under emotional pressure. This can be KILLING
suzanne capleton - Fantasy always fascinates us
especially when it is coupled with romance and mysticism.
Suzanne in her novel "ramorgra: the
toll of immortality" tells the story of an ordinary
country girl. She nurses a stranger. And she is led on to an
adventure. She is on a journey to discover her past, to save
lives and to end evil. She may be an ancient deity. FANTASTIC
sonicstoryteller5 - 'Sonic the Hedgehog' is a
video game. It requires some creativity to create a poem about
it. Eric Andersen creates magic with his poem
"the rivalry". Sonic, Miles Tails
Prower and Dr Eggman Robotnik are the characters. While playing
the game, there is pleasure but there is pain too. Excite hangs
heavy in the air. There are mighty opponents and there is
cleverness needed. THRILLING.
angelxgood - Love stories make the world go
round. Here too, we have a beautiful story in
Sally's novel "gaara love
story". It is the story of a beautiful girl Gaara
living in a village. She has a good friend in Maria. Both friends
look after each other's needs. And one day she falls in love with
Kazekage. He too seems to be fascinated with her. LOVELY
deannajoy - When the guy you are going steady
with breaks off, it can be the end of the world for many girls.
Deanna in her poem "what
happened?!" was dating a guy. And he broke off with
her. He never seemed to care for her but she loves him dearly.
Her head is filled with pain. She feels dead inside and cries.
She wants to be TWOGETHER.
Twilightangel - We all place so much importance
on physical beauty. But it is a passing phase. One grows old and
faded. Life is continuous. This is the message of
Twilight's poem "broken
beauty". The world goes after a beauty. No
one celebrates life, which is the only continuous part. One must
fight for such things. This is highly inspiring. It can motivate
anyone especially young. COURAGEOUS.
Take care until next week...CHEERS!... and lots of luv and
kisses...and...and...(I said SHUT UP!!!)