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Bloody Red Kiss chapter 1: To Live

Novel By: Bachi
Non-Fiction


Bachi,a young girl whose name means curse, wants nothing more than to love and be loved by someone other than her brother .A short while after she was born, Bachi's mother died. When she was 8 her father left her and her brother,Yume, who was only 13 at the time.(Bachi also has a few more secrets worth telling.) One of them is that she has never kissed a boy, another is when she was 12 she tried to kill herself after she heard about her past but cowered out, Bachi's final secret is more of a wish, she wants love and adventure like her favorite shoujo mangas. When her life is saved by Yuki, a handsome vampire, she gets just what she wanted.And much more! View table of contents...

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Submitted: Jan 4, 2008    Reads: 226    Comments: 3    Likes: 2   


 "Bachi", Ami called from outside. 

 "Amazing, you're the only person in Japan who is really up at 8:00 in the morning when we don't even have school.",Bachi called back from her window.

 "Well I over slept!", she called back, "Just hurry up and get dressed."

 "Yeah, yeah. I'm coming!",Bachi griped."It's the first day of summer and you woke me up at 8:00, I can't belive it!"

 The events from the morning kept replaying in Bachi's mind. It's all she could remember from earlier today other than Yume telling her goodbye on his way to work. The events from nearly an hour ago were cristal clear and kept haunting her. Walking alone in the forest. Somthing came. Scratched me. Bachi held her bleeding neck. The rain was coming down hard and she layed in a pool of blood on the side of the old dirt path. A sudden thought entered her mind. I'm going to die. No one is here to help me. I can't even talk none the less get up and call for help. I'm going to faint and die in my sleep at the age of 16. Some hikers might find my body tomorrow if I'm lucky. Was I murdered? Stop Bachi your talking like your dead. Haha talking, I can't even blink. No, Yume already lost Mommy and Dad cause of me, so i can't just leave him. Using one hand to hold her neck, she used her other arm to pull herself out of the rain to a tree near the dirt path. She leaned against the trunk of the tree. Glancing back she saw a trail of blood leading to where she was. So this is how you feel when your on a plane about to crash and you know there is no way you can survive. What a horriable feeling. Bachi stoped holding her neck and put her arms near her sides. Bachi's eyes started to close and with her last breath she muddered,"Goodbye."

Next chapter:Bachi Awakes!

I'm sorry this chapter is so short everyone, my next one won't be!


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^.^

Posted: Jan 4, 2008

Already interested, I can't wait for more.

Posted: Jan 4, 2008

too short but good

Posted: Jan 5, 2008



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