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Bloody Red Kiss chapter 2: Bachi Awakens!

Novel By: Bachi
Non-Fiction


Bachi wakes up neither heven or hell. She is still on Earth! She meets Yuki in this chapter! Please commet and tell me what you think. View table of contents...

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Submitted: Jan 4, 2008    Reads: 74    Comments: 5    Likes: 3   


 "Aaaaaawwwww", Bachi groaned waking up.

 "O'! I see your up!," said a rather fat woman who was in a maids outfit over in a corner of the strange room poring tea."I was worried you might die! Well you sure are lucky. The master usully dosen't help his victims."

 "Victim!," Bachi yelled, then imedeitly grabed her neck."Ouch!"

 "O', don't yell, your not completly healed," the woman said.

"Ok. But what do you mean by victim? And also 'healed'? And where am I? What happened to me? And who is your 'Master'! And...."

 "Slow down child! All questions will be answered if they are ment to be. O', and I'm Margret!"

 "But I didn't ask tha..."

 "But you were thinking it!"

 "Ok so I WAS wondering who you were. But I also want to know who I'm a victim of."

 "Your not a victim of anyone but Oujou," said a mystirious dark figure standing in the door way.        *Oujou means death*

 "M-master."

 "Master?",he can't be older than 17, thought Bachi."So who are you exactly, other than 'Master'? And who is Oujou?"

 "O', Why your full of questions arn't you?!"

 "Oujou is an evil force that did that to you," he said pointing at the bandages around Bachi's neck.

 "And you saved my life didn't you?"

 "Yes I did."

 "Well, thanks. So who are you again?"

 "My name is Yuki."

 "Well I'll be going now Yuki, and thanks again!"

 "I can't allow you to do that. Oujou doesn't attack humans often, and I need to find out why he went after you."

 "Humans? Wait so your trying to tell me that some mongster attacked me even though I'm human? What else is there?"

 "Alot more."

 "Wait, so if you know about this then you're not human?! So what are you a warwolf?"

 "Don't be so stupid and naive."

 "So you're human?"

 "No...........I'm a vampire," he said leaving the room and a stunned Bachi alone.


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Comments:

its good but its really short

Posted: Jan 4, 2008

Great work, loved the ending. A bit too short. Contact me when you post the next piece.

Posted: Jan 4, 2008

yeah i know it's too short but im gonna try to make longer posts and after christmas break ends ill try to post some more friday ro saturday every week

Posted: Jan 4, 2008

that was good

Posted: Jan 5, 2008

its good but its really short.
any stories with vampires or werewolves have my attention.
i like it

Posted: Jan 5, 2008



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