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He is MY brother....

Novel By: Kritika
Non-Fiction


This is a true story of a sister who embarks on a journey to find her long lost brother..........


The details are not accurate but the story IS true.... View table of contents...

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Submitted: Jul 19, 2008    Reads: 51    Comments: 11    Likes: 6   


 
“What do you mean you had been expecting me?”,I sputtered.
 
“Why?Aren’t you Ms.Anne Fitzgerald?Daughter of Melissa and Samuel Fitzgerald AND sister of Brandon Fitzgerald?”,He asked me,stressing the word ‘sister’.
 
I nodded involuntarily.Yes of course! I was the sister of a brother, I didn’t even knew, had existed till two days back!!
 
“Yes ,I am Brandon’s sister and THAT is precisely why I am here.I would be highly obliged if you could tell me about him.”,I said.Though I wanted to know about how HE knew me,I resisted the urge…I would ask him that,but not right now.
 
“I am really sorry but I cannot help.I am bound to an agreement between me and your mother,which I will not breach”,He replied.
 
I was dumb-founded.How COULD this man say that he couldn’t help me?And what was this ‘agreement’ he was talking about?
 
He must have guessed what was I thinking because he further added ,“I wish I could do something for you!”. Why of course you can! Just tell me about my brother!! “Why don’t we go out and talk a little?The garden is blooming with all kinds of flowers this time of the year.Maybe I could explain a few things to you.”,he continued.
 
 
        I nodded again.He had a lot of explaining to do………..I’ll make sure of that.


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Comments:

hey excellent i hope u finfd him soon gr8 work

Posted: Jul 19, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks!

GRRR I was positive he was the brother. Oh well
~Kaori

Posted: Jul 19, 2008

Author Comment:

hehe........lolzzzzzzzz!

I wonder what will he say to her.Hmmm...And yea right "Im sorry I cant break the promeas I gave your mother",but she isnt here now,lol.I mean why can he just tell her smtn about her brother.Well,I got in a discusion now,lol..Ill shut up now...
Great novel.I cant wait to read what will happen next.

:)

Posted: Jul 20, 2008

Author Comment:

discusions are good =D

What you din't realise was that he's a priest too[duh! i forgot to mention that?!!!?].......and they DO NOT break promises!

LOL


Thank you for your encouraging comments!

grr...old man spill it already!! lOl

Posted: Jul 20, 2008

Author Comment:

he dint spill much!!

there's a lot to come!!!!!!

LOL

tell me when more is up please ^^-

Posted: Jul 21, 2008

Author Comment:

=]]

yes i would !!

MORE PLEASE!!! where's the brother??? where is he????

Posted: Jul 22, 2008

Author Comment:

We shall see dear........i'm gonna post more in a day or two!

What is use of hiding the brother's identity now when parents are dead?? After all he also needs to know his sister...right??
So sad...the father is not helping

Posted: Jul 25, 2008

Author Comment:

Oh~~the father is already dead!! how can he help?!!?

lets see the reason di.........

LOL

~kritika

y is the father being so uncooperative...??The girl has a brother to find!!...i hope she gets a sufficient explanation now!

Posted: Jul 27, 2008

Author Comment:

That's omething even I would like to know!!

....


=D

Posted: Jul 28, 2008

Author Comment:

=]]]

Excellent word choice!

Posted: Jul 28, 2008

Author Comment:

Hehe.....thanks!!
LOL

~Kritika

How disappointing it must have been for the poor girl! You've conveyed the emotions well.

Posted: Jul 31, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks a lot Urja...i'm glad that i was able to convey the emotions!!



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