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The Phantom Of The Old House.

Novel By: RomanceLover2016

Someone is living in an old house far from Canton. and is searching for a beautiful woman to be his bride.
Debbie Mayfield, Beautiful, Attractive, auburn hair, green eyed, woman. she's married to her high school sweetheart, Peter Mayfield, they have two children, a 4-year-old daughter named Sarah, and a 10-year-old son named Jonathan, They live in a house in a shaded tree-line neighborhood in a town called canton. View table of contents...



Submitted:Apr 12, 2013    Reads: 7    Comments: 0    Likes: 0   


A Mysterious Phantom is living in an old house far from Canton.

Chapter 1.

Around 6:00 in the morning, at a house in a shaded tree-line neighborhood, Debbie Mayfield was in the kitchen cooking breakfast, when she looked out of her kitchen window, and noticed an old House sitting on a hill.

"Why do I get the feeling that their's someone looking at me through the window", Debbie said to herself.

She continued cooking breakfast, while at the old house, a Mysterious Phantom was watching Debbie, he was smiling at her.

About 6:01 later, Debbie was having Breakfast with her husband Peter, and their two children, Sarah and Jonathan, Another 6:30, Sarah and Jonathan went off to school, and Peter went to work, Leaving Debbie alone in the house, about 7:00 later, Debbie was washing the breakfast dishes, and put away, she started doing her morning routines, she vacumed the living room floor, mopped the kitchen floor, did the laundry, She put Sarah's clothes in Sarah's bedroom, Jonathan's clothes in his bedroom, About 7:01, Debbie was putting her and Peter's clothes up in their master bedroom, when she heard a voice calling her name.

"Debbie, Debbie, Debbie", The Mysterious Voice called as Debbie started looking around to find the voice.

"Where are you?", Debbie asked as she looked at herself in the looking-glass mirror.

Suddenly Debbie saw herself in the looking-glass mirror, she was wearing a beautiful dress, her auburn hair was beautiful too, Debbie slowly moved her hand on her auburn hair, suddenly she saw the mysterious phantom, Debbie put out her hand and he took it, he lead her through the looking-glass,

Debbie felt as if she was hypnotized, as the mysterious phantom lead her down a tunnel, he looked back at a hypnotized Debbie, as he continued leading her down the tunnel, they made it to the end of the tunnel, where a horse was waiting for them, the mysterious phantom put a hypnotized Debbie on the horse, while he led the horse away from the tunnel, until they came to a dock, where a small boat was waiting, the mysterious phantom took a hypnotized Debbie off of the horse, he put her in the boat, he got in the boat after her, and started rowing the boat, about an hour later, the mysterious phantom rowed the boat to his underground lair, he got out of the boat, and tied it up, he took a hypnotized Debbie by the hand, he helped her get out of the boat, he took her away from the boat, he made her stand in front of a large curtain, he walked toward a curtain cord, he lifted the curtain cord and the curtain opened to reveal a female mannequin wearing a beautiful wedding dress, when Debbie saw it, she fainted until the mysterious phantom grabbed her, he carried her to his bed, he laid her down on top of the bed, he looked at her with his loving eyes, he left her alone.


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