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Saving Vernie's life

Poetry By: RJohnson

Tags: Suffering, Poem


Submitted:Sep 7, 2011    Reads: 4    Comments: 0    Likes: 0   

My brother saved his bride's life.

He came close to losing his wife.

Her oxygen meter would have normally registered at 100 but it registered at 10 instead.

If my brother hadn't rushed out to get a doctor, Vernie would be dead.

When an oxygen level drops that low, it's supposed to set off an alarm.

Because of that incompetent hospital, people will probably be harmed.

Rick hurried to get a doctor when Vernie started having convulsions.

When I think about that stupid hospital, I feel nothing but revultion.

The alarm didn't work and that's pure negligence.

Taking people to that hospital makes no sense.

If Rick hadn't acted fast, Vernie would be dead and that's a fact.

Those incompetent hospital employees better clean up their act!


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