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Bella Swan Review...uh dont get me started..

Short story By: dclovesfd
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Submitted:Jan 25, 2010    Reads: 597    Comments: 1    Likes: 0   


Ok, about Bella Swan. Here is alist of things that piss me off about her. And another one about her that doesn't that thins that steph should fix.

Pisses me off.

1. Bella gets Edward. When Edward clearly should get some one else.

2.Bella hurts Jacob.

3.Bella is a over whiney BITCH.

4. She complains to much.

5. She doesn't see Edwards flaws.

6. She thinks Edward is perfect. When she really needs to have a talk with that boy so he can slap her.

7. She causes Edward to have a break down because she wants to keep the baby.

8. She tried to make Edward have sex with her in Eclipse. that boy has to go threw enough! jesus..

9. She is stupid and should have realised she loved Jake to!

10. In new moon..no girl would have acted like that unless they were mental! well..she did hang with vamps ..so..my point proven..

11. She is to wanting and needing. she needs to learn how to stand on her own two legs!

12. She jumped off a cliff..JAKE WOULD HAVE GOT HER IF SHE DIDN'T DO THAT!

13. She is so weak that Edward has to take care of her every day and night..

14. She moved to forks..

15. She thinks Edwards hotter then Jasper BOOO! GO JASPER!

16. Shes hurt both men she loves...

17. SHE ALMOST KILLED JAKE FOR IMPRINTING!

Things that do not really piss me off to much.

1. She had Renesmee.

2. She yelled at Edward and grew some balls when he was all mad for hurting her from having sex.

3. She cared about the babies life and not just her own stinking life.

4. she got over the jake and nessie imprinting thing.

5. She listened to alice for once i her life in breaking dawn.

6. she got turned into a vampire.

7. she jumped farther then edward in there first hunting trip.

8. she learned not to be so whiney.

THINGS THAT STEPH SHOULD CHANGE..

1. Edward and Bella fall in love way to fast..make it a little slower. More dates. More hints and action.

2. Make bella less..not human..no girl woukd act like her..

3. Make her less complainy and needing..

4.The saga and series went to fast. more detail and more ideas, and you could have written two more books with all that stuff left over.

5. make more in Jakes point of view..

6. finish midnight sun..

7. put japser in more of them!

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