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WOMEN I NEVER GOT THEM

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ITS ABOUT WAT I ASKED MYSELF AND I NEVER GOT NY ANSWER View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Jul 16, 2008    Reads: 66    Comments: 8    Likes: 4   


My thoughts and me would never change every time I answer my unanswerable question another question arises, every time that my heart goes out and I enter this world with my clean thoughts I find new questions.
In this century where women have proved their worth not only as a mother, a sister or the several roles she plays but also as a power that would take the world as it comes and hold the reins of this luxury and power ridden world with her male counterpart but have we ever realized that is this so called empowerment really accepted by us, despite of all hikes we are with you, am I really with them?
Obviously I said yes and after I did so I must say I am the biggest liar in this world, just think on one hand I say “I am with you ‘go rule’ the next moment I say I wont tolerate a woman over taking me, On one hand I say “sis I am happy you have qualified for mba” on the other I say “great she had this woman quota that I dint have”. I say my dear I am here only to look after your wish, “I will allow you to achieve all that you have dreamt, I will stand by you”, “yeah but I promise to myself once we are married I will earn and you will stay at home and oh! Your dreams please postpone it to some years in short at least postpone it to your next birth.” Whenever I see or read in the papers that a woman was harassed, molested, disrespected I ask in front of the public what this world has become after all this maturity how can someone do this? But while in private I think yeah it must be the girl who would have provoked him; so she deserved it, I proudly say that I am with every troubled woman but at my house I don’t have time for my mother and sister, have I forgotten that their condition is worst than a woman being molested for every day their dreams are molested and interpreted. No I haven’t forgotten though but its just that I have taken them for granted. Yet with the least guilt I say “we live in the world of women empowerment”. I have heard myself saying that at this age Indian culture is dead, woman have lost it they are so power driven that now men have to carry their purse and follow them, they are making men and they themselves are loosing dignity. “God they must be stopped” but saying this I never heard my conscience that feels so sick about me: it feels that I am that looser who, for some grudge over someone who “ditched me” or that I couldn’t see my dreams come true when a woman in front of me achieved it, has got something at last that I feel will morally block her feet, yet without any burden nor any guilt I say “we live in the world of women empowerment and men support them if not physically then morally”.

PLEASE GO THRU THIS IF U LIKE IT I WILL PUBLISH THE ENTIRE PIECE


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this was a comment from afrend shona
its grtt.......i know dat i should write smething fantastic or mindboglling abt this article.........but smetimes things when not written down express much more dan when they r.......wat u have written proves dat the power of wriitin is really greater dan nythin in the world........its really hard not to stand upto ur own community or to that part of the world where u belong.......nyother male in ur place may have told dat ur writin is gud but wat u have written is just for sayin not to b followed.....but me being a grl im goin to say this......dat by writtin this article........may b u urself do not know how much u have done for the commomn woman out in the real world......it is said dat it takes time to change a particular notion ar a person's mindset towards smethin.........and people keep on sayin one should do thiss and dat for a woman's gud.......but how much do they really do.....day just say......but pieces such as these r the ones which wud a make a real in difference in the practical world......these r the ones which will create awareness in a person's mind.......nythin said for wat u have written is less.......but still im goin to say just one word.......EXCELLENT

Posted: Jul 16, 2008

That's a good one. No one can claim to understand women. Loved it.

Posted: Jul 16, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks for ur comment bro can u check my first attempt at poems

liked the way u express ur views

though i am new i found you to be experienced

can u please go thru my articles
and my poems
first love;love
and conspiracy
and give ur reviews me waiting anxiously

I agree with shaggy. Women are too complex. An enjoyable read.

Posted: Jul 16, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks for ur comment can u go thru my poems
as its the first tym i tried hands at poetry
liked the way u express ur views

though i am new i found you to be experienced

can u please go thru my articles
and my poems
first love;love
and conspiracy
and give ur reviews me waiting anxiously

hi! shreeram. u need to be extremely courageous to write an article on women. as i gather from about comments, u've entered a forbidden territory. i find it well written. lol. ;-)

Posted: Jul 16, 2008

Author Comment:

maam it so happened that one day i heard a show that said women now a days have lost it i felt it wrong so i expressed it in my way

i just want to know maam wat a woman wud think
and maam sud i publish the entire article or only this paragraph

naina
(not registered user)

simply mindblowing article.............no words to express my feelings...as to exactly what i am feeling now............gr8

Posted: Jul 17, 2008

Author Comment:

THANKS DI I WAS EAGERLY WAITING FOR UR REACTION
YTHANKS FROM THE BOTTOM OF MY SOUL

hey frends the entire version oif this parah is my new posting the article titled women empowerment

Posted: Jul 17, 2008

i am glad that u were truthful in the post in admitting that u also feel `hurt`` when u see a woman succeed. I am glad that u have so much respect for Women in ur life...

Posted: Jul 18, 2008

Author Comment:

maam i have two sisters and my mom is my life i have seen woman and their dreams murdered i hope my work can make a woman feel that i am trying to be truthful

Very honest, Women are very complicated.

Posted: Jul 19, 2008

Author Comment:

women may be complicated but men like me have never allowed them to get out of their complication just making a start to may be feel their pain thanks for ur comments i will keep tthem in my heart



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