Okay, this was harder than i thought it would be.
My two final contestants both did really good jobs...
Your story was really good, the whole dream idea was a really good way to put it and still seem like something totally real 8)
I gotta say that I admire the way you put it all together...
Your story was also really good, the story line helped pull everything together really well.
(Letting him wake up first was a really good way to get the point across.)
And the winner is MidnightQueen12
Both entries were really good and came together well. Cressida Vladimir comes in as a close 2nd.
Thank you both for entering and for further questions on why it turned out the way it did, you can email me at email@example.com
P.s. a new challenge will be up soon, hopefully not nearly as confusing :)