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FINALLY !!!! I have a challenge of my own!

By: Kritika
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I know its not something very original but i wish that everyone has fun with this challenge! View table of contents...

Submitted: Jun 27, 2008 Reads: 113 Comments: 32 Likes: 2

Okie dokie...........here we go now!!!

So.......this is the challenge:

First of all you will choose a number between 3 and 10.

Then i will give you a sentence according to the number you have chosen.

Then using the letters of this sentence you have to write a poem/story in such a manner that each letter of this sentence is also the first letter of each sentence of your poem/story.

I hope you get my point!!! :D

Anyways if you haven't then here's an example:

The sentence :MY BEAUTIFUL LADY

The poem:

M - Millions of dragons died because of my sword
Y - Yes fighting for the weak is my goal in life

B - But on a rainy January day
E - Everything changed in a second
A - A beautiful princess cross my trail
U - Unknown of what to become
T - This changed my future totally
I - In a flash I save her from evil
F - Fate enters my road
U - Unbelievable beauty and sweetness she stands before me
L - Lady Fairmaiden my princess of dreams

L - Long and hard was my trail
A - And truly worth every mile
D - Drifting to the world
Y - Yes I end up by an Angel

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Comments:

indiefreak

whoa!!! give me a sentence then! i choose number...7... because i love final fantasy 7... lol!!

Posted: Jun 27, 2008

Author Comment:

7 ?!lol.........ummmm i guess i'll give you something easy.....okie so here it is---

Earth is the only planet which supports life.

All the best and have fun!

xjamesdavisx

haha I gotcha kritika well hit me with an 8

Posted: Jun 27, 2008

Author Comment:

Haha i hope get it james........an 8?
not too bad for you ^.~

okies....*THINKING HARD*............ummmmmmmm ok
here's your line--

Coming face to face with an unimaginable evil!!

haha! now i guess i gotcha James

Anyways have fun.......lol

And all the best too........=]

AllyDee

I wana tryyyyy!!!
haha
What number to pickkk???
hmmmmm.....
I can't decide.
How about numberrr 9!!!!
Yeahh that seems like a good number.
and its alright if I write a short story right???
:]

Posted: Jun 27, 2008

Author Comment:

yea ally! it's perfectly alright you can write a poem or a short story.........as you wish!!!

Ok so u pick up a 9.........mmmmmmmmmmmmm*evil grin returns to my face*

here is your line---

A miracle needed to stop the epidemic on earth...........

howzaATT???

All the best and have fun =]

LOL

Bradtruscott

hwy, this sounds like fun! one thing though, does the poem have to be ABOUT your sentence? like your sentence, BEAUTIFUL LADY kinda went along with what the poem was about.

ANYWAY, gimme.......6. I know not very hard but hey!

~Brad

Posted: Jun 27, 2008

Author Comment:

No brad there's absolutely no need for the poem to be about the sentence .........you just have to use the letters of the sentence.
so u take a 6 hhmmmmm.......Well not very hard but okies...........so your sentence is---

Thinking about vampires i started hyperventilating.......

i hope its not very difficult!!!

Anyways have fun and all the best.....

lol
~Kritika

Kirsten Rain

How about I try a 10

Posted: Jun 27, 2008

Author Comment:

My first 10er!!

ok.........so lets see.........

The world of vampires and werewolves was beckoning me endlessly..........

Uhm i guess this should do =]

All the best and have fun!!! ^.~

Lol

~Kritika

xjamesdavisx

Heyyy Heyyy woman what's the topic lol haha just remember we'll see who gots who (evil smile muahahah)

Posted: Jun 27, 2008

Author Comment:

*shoots brad with a gun*..........now i gotcha!!!

ahahhaha!
anyways all the best!

xjamesdavisx

ehhhh I got one already written about addiction.... Imma post that instead okk You'll love it ohh hush haha

but muahaha I GOT U and whatt ?

Posted: Jun 27, 2008

Author Comment:

LOL

i already read and liked it!!
Great work

~Kritika

jfm98

I will LOVE to try!! Give me a...5 ( EASY I know, but I'm kinda busy!)

Posted: Jun 27, 2008

Author Comment:

5......umm ok.............so your line is---

MY life is perfectly disastrous

how's that?!

have fun and all the best
lol
~Kritika

Dark Skylight

Woow,that's cool.Ok,I will choose number...hmmm let's see...Ok,I pick number 5 too,lol... :)

Posted: Jun 27, 2008

Author Comment:

another 5er hmmmmmmmm ok.......
your line is---

the ancient pyramids are stupendous

all the best and have fun!

controverse

Oooo SO COOL. Gimme a 10. I tackle all my 10's head on. Mwahaha.

Posted: Jun 27, 2008

Author Comment:

i knew you would go for a 10!!

soooooooo here's your line........*DRUMROLLS*--

The elegant and vivacious woman was never happy in life

i guess that's simple enough for you!!

All the best

lol

darlingILY

Oh, yay. I love challenges. :d
Ehh..I have a question though, I'm making a short story, so could the letters be anywhere in a paragraph, or strictly at the beginning?

Umm. I pick an 8. =]

Posted: Jun 27, 2008

Author Comment:

i'm sorry but the letters have to be at the beginning of the sentence.........

so you pick an 8.........muhahaha!!

here is your line---

the vapid woman was obsessed with her elegance

All the best n have fun

lol

Ayame

10 please

Posted: Jun 27, 2008

Author Comment:

another 10er........hhhhhhhmmmmmmmmmmm

okies so here's your line---

The world was at her feet but she wasn't happy

Have fun ^.~

lol!

xox babiilicious hunnibunsS xox

whoa!x!..
hmm.. poetry is not my forte!!..
buuuut... frick.. frack!!x!!... I can't resist a challenge!..
nd damn it!.. this one is just too darn yummy!x!..
xoxo

so...hit mee wiv an 8 hunni!x!...
not too hard that I cry.. but hard enuf so I push mii self!x!..

but work wiv me ere hun... dnt make me cry!x!..
xlolx
xoxoxoxox

Posted: Jun 27, 2008

Author Comment:

don't worry........you can also write a short story!!

so heres it goes for our no. 8---

Her mental stability was gone thanks to him

I guess that should be fine with you!

all the best!!!!!!!

Lol

AngelaSteele

I want a 10!!!!! :)

Posted: Jun 27, 2008

Author Comment:

I knew you would go for a 10!!

okie so here's your line---

Terror and suspense grab the reader and don't let go

I guess that's good enough for you...=D

anyways all the best and i hope you enjoy doing it!!!

and sorry for the late reply!

LoveCicely

Hit me with a four (but make the words long.) something symbolic or sad please! =)

Posted: Jun 27, 2008

Author Comment:

umm ok so you want sad/symbolic and long words............

so here is your line ---

Abnegation turned out useless............i guess that's fine!!!

i hope you have fun!
all the best

~Kritika

klepSydra

a five for me.. im beginning ;D

Posted: Jun 28, 2008

Author Comment:

okie dear.........i'll be easy on you!! =]

your sentence is---

He's my annoying little brother.

i guess that should do for you

All the best and have fun!

XBrokenHeartedX

This sounds really fun! I pick the number...9
YAY! HA HA

Posted: Jun 28, 2008

Author Comment:

Okies so here we go zoe----

Ticks like a time bomb-and threat and terror

i guess that shoul be easy for you.........^.~

All the best and enjoy

xoxoxoLOLxoxoxox

saratopia

hmnm, sounds fun! I'll take 7.

Posted: Jun 28, 2008

Author Comment:

OKie so here's your line saratopia---

It was packed with white-knuckled twists

all the best and have fun!

ShadowyNightmare

Umm . . .6?

Posted: Jun 28, 2008

Author Comment:

okies so here's your line Shadowynightmare---

Your books are always page turners

all the best! =]

lemonluv

5 please! this sounds fun!
~Lemon

Posted: Jun 28, 2008

Author Comment:

so here you are lemon

Another brilliant "tour de force"

LOL
~Kritika

James Woodrow

ill have a try i choose 5

this sound like fun it dosen't need to be good does it?

Posted: Jun 29, 2008

Author Comment:

hahaha!!! the important thing is to try!...........write whatever you wish and don't worry about how it turns out to be..........

Anyways here is your line---

Pop goes the silly weasel

now isn't that random??!

All the best and enjoy...

lol
~Kritika

Pratibha

Hi love, i am bit upset, u did not inform me sweetheart. I accidentally discovered it, How can i not try for my sister?

I will go for 5 ...sounds easy na?

But i am aprrehensive buddy. I will ask Aamani also to join...she reminds me of ur sweetness...

Posted: Jun 29, 2008

Author Comment:

OMG di i'm sure i informed you........just check out your previous comments!

And if by any chance i dint then plz forgive me!!

And um whose Aamani?though i would b glad if she also joins in!!

Ok so u want a 5 hmmmmmmmmmm

Here's your line---

Just try running away Darling!!

mwuhahahha doesn't it sound evil??

Anyways all the best and have fun!!

Lol

~Kritika

subbu

Well my first ever challenge........lemme go for a ten.......

Posted: Jun 29, 2008

Author Comment:

well that's great confidence for your first challenge..........anyways here is your line---

you need a little inspiration to get going, isn't it?

i hope you like the challenge!!!

ALL the best and have have fun

lolz

~Kritika

jadey oneil

Im done with Lemonluv's challenge. So, im now taking yours into account. :-)

May I have 3 of your words please? Thanks! ^^

Posted: Jun 30, 2008

Author Comment:

3?!!

Oh well okay.............your line is--

wrenching my heart

whatever that is supposed to mean!!!

Anyways have fun and all the best........

do tell me after you are done..........

MAmberConrad

Okay, I'll try it.

I'll take 4 words.

MA

Posted: Jun 30, 2008

Author Comment:

4 hmmmmmmmmmm okay here's your line---

Premiere institute spreading madness

i hope you like it

Lol

And do tell me when you are done

All the best and enjoy

Pratibha

it's okay sweetheart...was pulling ur leg.....

* mischievous smile* ha ha ha.....hey this challenge is cool buddy.....u got brains and i am sure u r beautiful....

Posted: Jun 30, 2008

Author Comment:

*grins sheepishly* you really think so?!!

oxoxoxoxLOLxoxoxox

and i liked the brains part and well i dont care about the beauty part as long as people don't have to hide after seeing me!!!

toothpik17

hmm...I love a challenge. how about 2? i like that number. =^^= rawrzles!
Peace,
Riah Teh Muffin

Posted: Jul 4, 2008

Author Comment:

2!!??

well okiess..........you 2 words are------

Stupendous performance!!

LOL

All the best and have fun!

~Kritika

polkadotgirl

Hit me with number 9!

Posted: Jul 13, 2008

Author Comment:

okies.......here's your line---------

May you be happy and have all the cheers!

Good luck and have fun

LOL

~Kritika

KitKat123

That's tight! Alright I pick number 10!

Posted: Jul 18, 2008

Author Comment:

Number 10 hmm..??

OK then here's your line----Analyse the use of herbs in curing certain common diseases

How's that for being random!??! ^-^

LOL

Have fun!

TAke care

LOL

~Kritika

KitKat123

I was wondering if the sentence you gave me had to relate to my poem. Like my poem had to be about analyzing the use of herbs in curing certain common diseases.

Posted: Jul 25, 2008

Author Comment:

NO not necessarily....you can write whatever you want!

KitKat123

Alright I'm finished! It's called friendship or more. I hope you like it! (Sorry it took so long :p)

Posted: Aug 3, 2008

Author Comment:

Nevamind! i'll check it out!

Poison Passion

sign me up!!! i'll take number 5. this sounds hecka fun!!

Posted: Aug 12, 2008

Author Comment:

Studies are just like shit!

this is your line and that's exactly how i'm feeling right now!!

All the best n have fun!

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