This is going to be my personal favourite. For the first time, i am not apprehensive while posting it. In fact, i am eager to know what all of you think about it and I would be more than happy to take all the criticisms with a huge smile. A mother is biased and so am I towards this poem, but i may be wrong.
Thanks to the challenge by LEMON LUV....I could open my mind and soul through this poem..This is a poem with mind boggling array of emotions....and is quite haphazard too...BUT is written straight from soul...Sometimes the short term gain in career leads to long term losses which we realise when we lose those moments....can we go back? NOPE...THINK...and evaluate....IS EVERYTHING ALL RIGHT IN UR WORLD? IF NOT, SET IT RIGHT....it is NEVER TOO LATE....
I owe this huge thanks to VEE as well for the lovely lines - "Don't forget to tell someone you love them today..." which set me thinking till 2.00am until i could no longer sleep and got up to write this poem...i slept finally at 4.00am....i hope all of you would agree that the effort was worth it..I was having this 'hot'(ouch) discussion with my hubby who is always worried ...worried for future, for money, and is always surrounded by insecurities and in the process; he is missing out on beautiful things in life..He needs to "STOP" and think and re-consider his values and life style...and evaluate the loss VS gain...he is always running after a MIRAGE...”If I get this I would be happy...” but that end never comes...I am going to help him change...because lately since I joined Booksie, I realised that “EVERYTHING IS TEMPORARY...THE ONLY CERTAIN THING IS DEATH”
Submitted:Jun 30, 2008 Reads: 5 Comments: 2 Likes: 1
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