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Submitted: Jul 8, 2008    Reads: 42    Comments: 5    Likes: 1   


D- Daring

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A- almost desent

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V- Very loud

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E- Even he knows whats up.


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lol shweet poem about meh

Posted: Jul 8, 2008

Author Comment:

=P thx.

Ah, my good friend David. That poem describes him perfectly, especially the "very loud" part. LOL....Dave and I would yell across the classroom at each other every morning.

Posted: Jul 8, 2008

Author Comment:

lol.. ow my ears. haha, thx.

I like ur comment back. ow my ears. silly silly, aren't you. great job :D

L ♥

Posted: Jul 9, 2008

Author Comment:

yep i am.. i think. thx.

lovely thoughts...innovative

Posted: Jul 12, 2008

Author Comment:

thank u!!!! ^_^

lol... mine was better except im not a god dam puppy!

Posted: Jul 13, 2008

Author Comment:

lol!! thx... thats not what i've heard. jk



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