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Stormheart

By: UncommonCold
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Well, these are some lyrics that just flowed from my hand to the page, and I thought I'd get them out there. When I was writing it, I could hear it like a song in my head, but unfortunately, I don't write music, so yeah. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Jul 16, 2008    Reads: 55    Comments: 6    Likes: 3   


The silence is more deafening than thunder,
So I’m glad that the rain finally came.
I hear it on the roof and Iwonder
If I’ll ever be brave, or if things will stay the same.
I’m sad, and I don’t know why.
I’m shaking, and I want to cry.
I don’t know,
I don’t know-
I just want to fold in upon myself.
Feel like I’ve fallen down from my safe little shelf.
I feel like I’ll up and blow away on the wind,
I need oh, so badly, to feel the rainfall on my skin.
I’m so lost and tired of things going wrong,
They’ve been going in that direction for far too long.
It’s so wrong,
I’m long gone
On a long and lonely journey
And it feels like something’s out to hurt me.
My tears are falling, falling down,
And I swear I’m going to drown.
All I want is you to hold me,
I wish someone would have told me
That the road would be like this,
I can’t forgetour very last kiss.
I’m so lost, so lost
I can’t seem to go on.
I never knew what this would cost,
Or how badly this could go wrong.
I can’t breathe, can’t breathe
Because I’m watching you leave.
I’m no damsel, but I am so damn distressed,
How much more of me can break; how much more of mecan fail this test?
I don’t know what to do,
Standing here in front of you.
So hold on, hold on,
And let me imagine that we’re strong.
Hold on tight for just a little while,
Hold ontight, pleasemake me smile-
Hold me close, to the comfort of you,
Because I don’t know what to do.
Just let this rain caress my skin,
But don’t tell me it’s the end.
Let me imagine that this is were we begin,
Even though it’s just pretend.

So let this storm come, and make it okay.
I want the thunder and lightning to wash my thoughts away.
Goodbye love, goodbye now, I hate to see you go
But darling we both know
That this is how our story ends.


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Comments:

wow. this is really good. that sucks that you don't write music, then it'd be extraordinary. I'm curious to how it sounded put to music in your head... I love this line: I’m no damsel, but I am so damn distressed
Sweetness!!

Posted: Jul 18, 2008

Author Comment:

Awww! Thanks! I have a friend who writes music, so I might see what she can do with it, but I don't know if anyone will ever be able to write it the way it sounds in my head. I can hope, though!

UncommonCold:

Well written! Gave it an "I Like It" vote.

This can be posted as a "poem".

Thank you for becoming a fan.

If you have not done so already, please read and rate my postings entitled:

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3. "Love Intended: #1, #2 & #3",

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6. "POEMS" &

7. "Here To Stay".

Thank you.

Will be reading and rating all of your remaining postings and appending "I Like It" votes. Without commenting. Much of the time.

Again! Thank you!

Happy trails,

Ed Bradley.

Posted: Jul 18, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks!

Hey, nice one. I would love to hear it sung with music. I wish i knew a band that could play it! lol. Really i love it, and if you ever get the change, or have a friend in a band get it with music.... instant hit!

Posted: Sep 15, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you so much! I'm really glad you like it!!!! If I find a band that thinks they want to give these lyrics a chance, I'll let you know.

I sung this BTW....

Posted: Sep 15, 2008

Author Comment:

Really? How did it sound? Maybe you could send me an MP3 version some time?

I'm enjoying working on the music with you...so, yes, this will start sounding amazing!!

Posted: Sep 16, 2008

Author Comment:

AHHHHH! I'm so so so freaking excited that you recorded this for me!!!!

fantastic!! I LOVE the audio!!

Posted: Sep 16, 2008

Author Comment:

YAYYYYYYYNESS! Thanks SO much, Cat! Kitten and I have spent HOURS working on this baby, and I have to say that her voice totally brought these lyrics of mine to life. I love her to death, and I love the way she worked with my words to REALLY make them a song. All the credit goes to her on that point.



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