So let this storm come, and make it okay.
I want the thunder and lightning to wash my thoughts away.
Goodbye love, goodbye now, I hate to see you go
But darling we both know
That this is how our story ends.

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Well, these are some lyrics that just flowed from my hand to the page, and I thought I'd get them out there. When I was writing it, I could hear it like a song in my head, but unfortunately, I don't write music, so yeah. View table of contents...
Submitted: Jul 16, 2008 Reads: 55 Comments: 6 Likes: 3
So let this storm come, and make it okay.
I want the thunder and lightning to wash my thoughts away.
Goodbye love, goodbye now, I hate to see you go
But darling we both know
That this is how our story ends.
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wow. this is really good. that sucks that you don't write music, then it'd be extraordinary. I'm curious to how it sounded put to music in your head... I love this line: I’m no damsel, but I am so damn distressed
Sweetness!!
Posted: Jul 18, 2008
UncommonCold:
Well written! Gave it an "I Like It" vote.
This can be posted as a "poem".
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Posted: Jul 18, 2008
Hey, nice one. I would love to hear it sung with music. I wish i knew a band that could play it! lol. Really i love it, and if you ever get the change, or have a friend in a band get it with music.... instant hit!
Posted: Sep 15, 2008
I sung this BTW....
Posted: Sep 15, 2008
I'm enjoying working on the music with you...so, yes, this will start sounding amazing!!
Posted: Sep 16, 2008
fantastic!! I LOVE the audio!!
Posted: Sep 16, 2008
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