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Help me figure out a name for this story please!

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Submitted: Jul 13, 2008    Reads: 78    Comments: 19    Likes: 0   


Okay so I decided to start a new story, whether I post it on here or not will be up to you and me. I had a dream last night and it went like this:

My friend Kyrstyn and I were at my house when all of the sudden these random men came in and raided it, and my mom was no where to be found. Kyrstyn and I traveled all around our little town hiding, trying to find a way to get my mom back and bring these men to justice, (of course we didn't go to the police, because dreams don't make any sense.) It was a crazy dream, like a chase around our town, like these men were playing a twisted game with us. There were two that I remember but they didn't have names. One was after me, the other after Kyrstyn. I remember running across bridges, leaping over cars, and hiding in barns. I didn't have a cell phone to call anyone either, and we never went into anyone's house. Here is the prologue to the story in which I began.

"When sixteen year old Samantha finds out a secret her mother has kept from her for years, she doesn’t realize it could put her family’s life at stake. Sam’s mom gets kidnapped by mysterious men, and without thinking, she sprints far away from her house, finding a place of refuge. When she approaches her friend Laney about her issue, the two girls swear to tell no one and figure this out by themselves. Without wanting to put anybody else’s life in jeopardy, the girls decide not to enter anyone’s house so the crazy men can’t follow them there. But are these “kidnappers” really just men, or do they hold a secret as well? With the help of a hidden pistol the girls find, they attempt to hunt the kidnapper down without being hunted themselves."

Since my dream made little sense, this is what I got out of it. I am going to try and make it as similar as possible. I have been thinking of this dream all day and decided to write it down, and I might share it with the world. But I NEED YOUR HELP! I usually can think of good titles for stories, but I'm clueless.

If you have more than one title you want to suggest, please do. I need your help asap. Thanks for anyone to helps. If I use any of the names, I'll let you know, or I might even get an idea from one of the names and think of one myself. Either way, I would love suggestions. Thank you for reading this! :D

p.s: in my dream, i think the two men were vampires, because everywhere we ran they showed up and they knew a lot of things regular people couldn't, so I just assumed. Maybe its because I'm too obsessed with vampires? IDK. So I might throw that twist in, but I'll figure that out later.

-xStephStephx09


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Comments:

how about 'what is mom hiding', 'the serch', 'what lies in the dark', or 'the hunt'?? that is all that i can think of that would work with the story:] if i think of any more i will let you know:]

Posted: Jul 13, 2008

Author Comment:

ohhh thanks ill think about it. yes please let me know! thanks for replying!! :D

thats hella weird but cool dream. i had a nightmare where time was going backwards in a way except it was just people shrinking in way and my brother was in it and he was dying it was weird and i told my dad and he said it would make a good hororr movie lol anyways back to your situation.

It seems rather difficult. I love the story line, i can totally hear the narrotor guy from the previews saying that lol umm lets see a title.....

Oblivion???
My mothers secret life?
Into the Dark?
Two-Faced?
The Other Side?
World of Darkness?
Ah Crap,Vampires?
The Other Side of Betrayel?
Despair?
Fight or Flight?
Murder...or not?
Numb??
ummm im running out of ideas, hopefully these help!!=D

Posted: Jul 13, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks for all ur suggestions!! :D haha ya ur dream sounds like a good horror movie. usually i make my dreams into poems, novels, or short stories lol.

Wow
sounds really good.
&& I can't really come up with good titles
but How about
"Just another Secret"
"Kidnappers and Secrets"

If I think of anymore I'll tell you
:]

Posted: Jul 13, 2008

Author Comment:

oh thanks!!

Oh! Interesting idea! Hmm...let me see what titles I have for you:

"A Secret Untold"
"The Mystery Beneath The Lies"
"A Strange encounter" (not as good....)

hhhmmmm....I'll let you know if I think of anymore.

Posted: Jul 13, 2008

Author Comment:

OMG "A Secret Untold" was the title of a different story I wrote a long time ago. That is friggin weird. HAH! Thanks for the suggestions, I'll keep them in mind! :D

how 'bout
" Never ending Surprises" ?
"Kidnappers don't lie"?
"the hidden truth hurts" ?
"deceiving me"?

not sure if these'll help bt i love the story line. can't wait till you post it. if you do, that is. ;P

Posted: Jul 13, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks for the suggestions!!!! I hope you do read it if I decide to post it :) thank u again

LeAnne
(not registered user)

Sorry i'm not logged in, but i think this is intesifying!! very suspensful and interesting!
i don't think i have a title for it though.

Posted: Jul 13, 2008

Author Comment:

Well thank you. If you think of any "key words" or anything for this please let me know. The key words I got out of it were "Chase" maybe "Deadly" or "Game" something suspensful, ya know? Thanks for commenting, though. :)

this idea is really different ..... cool!
how about "chasing death" or "the hidden betray" ? thats all i got ........ hey can u help me with the title of my novel? :D see ya!

Posted: Jul 14, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks!

"The Secret Unvieled" ? I don't think my suggestions aren't that good. That's all I got! Sorry!

Posted: Jul 14, 2008

Author Comment:

oh okay thanks!

Hmmm... How about these:

'Hidden Secrets'
'An Oblivious Scene'
'Misread Motives'
'Lost in Lies'
'The Raid'
'Flight or Fight?'
'Around every Corner'


Uhhhhmmmmmmm... yup! thats all i got!

L8er girlly!,
~Sarah Rain

Posted: Jul 14, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank u I will consider them all! :D

Hmm. . . the men could have been shadow demons. Wait. . . I invented that demon kind for my story. . .

Possible Titles:
'The Followers'
'Running, Running'
'Pistol'
'Specialis' (means secret in Latin)
'Got to Get Away'
'In the Night'
'The Loners'
'The Silence'
'Only Savior' ~shrugs~
'The Darkest Way'

Yep. . . That is all I got. I kinda like the last one. . .

Posted: Jul 14, 2008

Author Comment:

i like urs ill keep them in mind. and no the men arent shadow demons lol.

Steph... you never cease to amaze me with your ideas. I like it... but you know how I am with titles... >.< I can't wait to read it so even if you don't show it to them... you better email me it. XP

Posted: Jul 14, 2008

Author Comment:

haha i will dana!!

so what did you end up picking?

Posted: Jul 15, 2008

Author Comment:

Nothing yet

AHHHHH

HOW ABOUT :

"THE CONDEMNED CHASE"

OR

" PERISHED SURVIVAL "

OR

DIVINE INTENTION - haha this one basically means wht its gonna take strategy wise for the girls to outsmart these kidnappers


i like this story VERY INTERESTING hmmm actually look at mine the others are kinda blehh

Posted: Jul 15, 2008

Author Comment:

lol ok thx

How About... Caught In The Web Of Deceit?

OR

The Same Thing as Above but in french

Attrapé En Web De Duperie

Posted: Jul 16, 2008

Author Comment:

nice..but no other language, especially french, I'd like to stick with an English name, thank u :)

Nixie
(not registered user)

Oh, this sounds awesome. Sorry it took so long, i've had a busy week so far. Well, I'm thinkgin "The Huntress" or something to do with secrets, "The Enigma" hmm... I'm going to let it simmer and come back! :) It's going to be great what ever you decide! ~ Nixie

Posted: Jul 17, 2008

Author Comment:

Oh thank u!!

The Truth is Always Harder... Gun Point... umm... Frost Bite? I don't know. Let me think. I'll give you some more later....

Posted: Jul 18, 2008

Author Comment:

frost bite is already a name of a book i have haha but thanks! :)

In the Dark?

Posted: Jul 19, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks for suggestion lol

How about simply, "Justice"?

"Chase Me Away"

"Don't Bite!"

"Sterces" (secrets spelled backwards? The 'c' would have the 'k' sound)

"Without Jeopardy"

"Running From Vampires"

just some ideas.

MA

Posted: Jul 31, 2008

Author Comment:

oh alright thanks for ur input!

hmmm. i love coming up with titles...

Stolen Secrets

dang. my brain's not working right now...i might come back with some better ones...

:)

Posted: Jul 31, 2008

Author Comment:

alright thanks!



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