PHASE 3: Here is the foundation.
Theme: Peace: what it means and its cost
Settings: A modern world at war with a few supernatural characteristics
Characters:1. Lou: is the evil half immortal master mind that started the events that lead to war, he is intelligent and very twisted, not much is important to him except his goal but despite all his evil it seems he is more than a little obsessed with the idea of getting his family to help him more than anybody else.
2. Christian: is a misguided highly intelligent boy who is quick to take responsibility, he believes that Lou is his problem and the less people involved the better, he can be blinded by revenge and make mistakes that he sometimes cant take back.
3. Hope: is a compassionate and gifted girl whose kindness leads her to blind faith in even the worst of people, she is helpful and sees the worlds problems as more important than her own, she is very mature for her age and his mainly only affected by the things Christian says about her more than anybody else.
4. Christopher: is the opposite of his children as in he is not very gifted and would rather run from his troubles, but he is able to work hard for his children, he hates his farther more than anybody else but wont show it.
Style:This is something i really like, in this story each chapter will feature another characters point of view so its a new point of view each chapter
Plot:part 1: (first Lou's perspective) The twisted immortal Lou and his six subordinates known as the "Realvolutionaries" (get it revolution with real, whatever the name is up for debate) entices the " insert name here 1' to attack the "insert name here 2" after backing up the economy of 1 so they will feel indebted to them, they also used many international incidents where important figures were assassinated by does of the other country but in reality it was Lou's men that did the killing. (now Christopher's)This is all going on while Lou is trying to teach his son Christopher to follow in his foot steps, of course Christopher does not want to comply and runs away from home to find a wife and live in as much peace as possible in one of the little part of the world that the war hasn't affected.
Part 2: (Christopher) A few years after running away he is found by Lou who decides to bring him back home by killing his wife and taking his twin children as his own. Lou promised only to allow the twins to live if Christopher swears his loyalty and do only as Lou commands him to do, Christopher obeys and spends the next years of his life in servitude to Lou and his only able to see is children when he sneaks away into their room at night. He tells his children little by little that he is their farther and also reveals Lou's dark intention for the world which is to have humanity wipe itself out so that peace can finally be forever.
Part 3: (Christian) Through the stories his farther told him Christian realizes that Lou is too powerful for him to stop alone so he decides that he and his sister have to run away and get help from the outside world, in the dead of the night without even telling Christopher Christian takes his sister Hope and to his surprise they easily escape. Suspicious Christian lies to Hope that he left something important behind and goes back to investigate why it was so easy for then to leave, upon his return Christian meets up with Lou who hands him some notes that Christian took while he thought them of war, the world, and strategy. Lou tells Christian that he will be the one to help hi with his plans the most, after that instead of returning to his sister, Christian lies once again(through telepathy) and tells his sister to run away since he as been captured.
Part 4: (Hope) With her brother held captive by Lou she abides by his wishes and runs as far as she can from Lou, she ends up wandering through many war torn cities were despite her own poor situation she stops to help any stranger in trouble or injured with her knowledge of medicine that exceeds that of even the most expert of medical professional. With her kindness Hope became a strong figure of support for most people she met, every night she made sure to talk to Christian who was captured and tell him about all the good she is doing. Christian tells Hope she is waiting her time and her efforts mean nothing because the war still goes on, Hope is discouraged by Christian's words but keeps on helping people and starts her own hospital to help people from all sides of the war.
I got more but i am kind of tired, this is just the foundation for the first few parts and it could still use a little detail. These parts are actually like 3-4 chapters each so they do need a bit of padding. Anyways tell me what you think.