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18 to 19, and the Life Behind the Days of it

Novel By: B Leaf
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This is my life the story of it the way I feel the way live the way I love. This is my opinions poetry ideas and interpretation of myself and this world around me. My past my present no matter how dirty I will put them on the table for all to see. This is my writing experiment and in this experiment as I call it I will write every day for the next year of my life about something that well will hopefully let you and possibly myself learn and gain some knowledge or even take a laugh or something out of my story and thoughts. None of this is fiction this is my life and mind frame. Don't forget everyday of life is a chapter in your own book and mine. View table of contents...

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Submitted: Jun 24, 2008    Reads: 18    Comments: 1    Likes: 0   


Day 14

My heart is rusty like the hinges of an old door that never stops squeaking
No matter how much oil you put my heart never starts working
Pumping and pumping day after day screeching to the heavens
My heart lives in dismay with endlessly intertwined miry days
How long has it been since my heart loved
Way past this millennia my heart has longed
How long has it been since my heart smiled and meant it
Far far to long that I almost can’t remember if my teeth are straight
How long has it been since happiness grazed this place.
This was lost when I wasn’t found by anyone true enough to fill a space
What will make this rusty heart of mine shine like new
Maybe the love that smoothes my cracks and fills my holes
Maybe someone to ship me into shape for a reason other then myself
This heart still pumps faking smiles pretending to be real
What does your heart feel. 


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Comments:

This is pure beautiful. I loved how you related your heart to a door, and it's rusty hinges. Amazing writing stle you have, I am stunned and ready to read more! =)

Posted: Aug 11, 2008



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