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18 to 19, and the Life Behind the Days of it

Novel By: B Leaf
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This is my life the story of it the way I feel the way live the way I love. This is my opinions poetry ideas and interpretation of myself and this world around me. My past my present no matter how dirty I will put them on the table for all to see. This is my writing experiment and in this experiment as I call it I will write every day for the next year of my life about something that well will hopefully let you and possibly myself learn and gain some knowledge or even take a laugh or something out of my story and thoughts. None of this is fiction this is my life and mind frame. Don't forget everyday of life is a chapter in your own book and mine. View table of contents...

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Submitted: Jul 5, 2008    Reads: 13    Comments: 1    Likes: 0   


Day 25

I am sorry not feeling so entusiastic about writing today so I am taking a break to an extent for the day. I am going to write still but just not do anything else on booksie.

My idea of human rights, you should have the right to shelter, food, and water. As a human this is your right. Do we have the right to this? If I don't have enough of the hypotheticaly worth something currency that again isn't worth anything we just allow for this to happen. What would they do if an entire nation of people were to say no I am not paying money for my food my house or my water. Are they going to put the country into consentration camps or something. Isn't is somewhat exactly like a dictatorship telling us we are not allowed to do something because we don't have something. Excuse me Hitler wanted people to live more then others because they had something he liked. I am not trying to offend anyone here just a good example I am going to be continuing with. The people he liked or "gestapo" sorry if i spelled that wrong. In the american government let's say the "gestapo" are you tax paying middle class people forced to work jobs multiple jobs and they do not have a choice. They need to either do this or get cast out of the home they "own." If you were against Hitler what was going to happen to you if you disagreed? If you don't pay for your house with "money" here they will throw you in prison. This may be slightly similar to concentration camps no? So if Hitler was trying to execute the Jewish people. America would be trying to execute the poor patrons not able to present what the government or dictator approves of. Is our government like Hitler? The fact that you are not allowed to live life if you don't have a substance worth hypothetical value. Isn't this the act of genicide if we consider homeless deaths and people inmprisoned wrongfully. America commits genicide as do a majority of all modern governments. We should just call government Bubba the guy that beats up on you when you are down and out. What is the deal with healthcare here I am talking about just America but healthcare as a proffesion. Why is there a need for it wouldn't it make sense if we could just make all people healthy. Why do we need to have some special name and division that profits off denying people life. This is assination companies profiting off their limited coverage. Why do we live in a civilization where we have so much excess and yet we decide to kill and let people die because they don't have something that people invented. Hmmm the real question should be why do we buy into this. If you can find an idea to stop the suffering of people and stop this genecide I am with you and I constantly ponder and look for this awnser. This is why I write this so that maybe I can help people with the thoughts going through their child's mind. Maybe so I can inspire a better tommarow. Maybe because I am not doing anything else in my life. Sorry for my spelling if it is horendously off. I hope that your definition differs from the rights we are given even if it doesn't that is fine. I appreciate your time if you did that if not it is alright itt isn't like I am going to track you down and steal your house because of some loan or credit card bill debt. I give my love to all that live. May love be the force that stops people from being forced into not living. B Leaf. Sorry for lack of structure today just kinda tired and out of it I went back and noticed some things like the missing commas in the first sentace. Thanks Ted sorry for the randomness. Also I usualy do not write straight onto booksie so I appologize again I would usualy have a spell checker and other such things. Another appology as I re read this it just leads off from yesterday to an extent so the people that only read from today would be very confused.


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Comments:

First I would like to commend you for bearing your soul and mindframe. It takes guts.

Now, to be honest with you, it was hard to follow. You are right about the spelling. Punctuation and grammar, too. I usually edit and re-edit, but if it is truely from your mind to keyboard, then it is...what it is.

I did get the gist of some of what you were trying to say, though.

For me, the United States is still the best country in the world, but the men and women that run it have lost sight of who they represent and why. As a country, a huge and wealthy country, we have a long way to go. I don't believe in communism, but we should help our fellow human beings when they are in need.

Also, for me, I believe that freedom is not free, and total freedom does not exist. Thanks again for sharing and making me think. I be watching for some new stuff from you. Ted

Posted: Jul 5, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks, I usually do it in a word program before posting on the site to make is as not horribly filled with errors. I was just kinda wanting to take a break yesterday so I decided I would do a quick piece. As for the jumpiness I make a mention of it at the beginning. Way back towards the first days that I am just writing as the thoughts come. If this thought defers slightly from the other but somehow also slightly connects some I will write it. Some days I just want to get it out of my head and free up some new room. Thank you for Leaving me a comment on this. It is really what I am trying to do is let modern day people understand maybe not your average eighteen your old but just an eighteen year old none the less. I think that the United States is the best country to an extent in my opinion. I believe that we do have great people and some of the best freedoms again to an extent. I again in my opinion feel that the health care we have and the school system are both not all that great currently. I am not saying this to contradict you or anything related to that just adding some facts that I see. I think that America is up with the best countries France being one and the UK Canada. The health care and schooling in France and the way they go about it is incredible. The health care for England and Canada are excellent as well. We meaning the people in congress have lost site of what we are trying to accomplish being a free country. We do have a long way to go and hopefully we can take steps towards a better America in the coming years. I do not believe in the ways of communism either. I believe in a hypothetical "utopia" someone I had described it to called it. A place where the people who like to watch tv can and not have any thing to worry about. The people who like to garden and farm doing it and feeding others. The people who like to work with cars and electronics do that. Ect. This was an in depth conversation and he brought up many good counter arguments. He said well who would clean your house or toilet. I didn't really think much of it because people could do it themselves. He came up with the concept what if you had people who liked to murder what would they do. It had taken me so long to come up with a solution and the one I came up with still wasn't that good. When I say a long time like 2 weeks not soley thinking about one thing though. I said have the murderers be our army because this world may have a quarrel with a completly happy and entirely peaceful nation. Words Gone Cheers



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