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The Chumbs

Novel By: Chumb
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Tags: drama, friends, family

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Submitted: Mar 24, 2008    Reads: 198    Comments: 2    Likes: 0   


It’s kinda funny when you look back on the past an wonder how cool it was to try things before you got to a certain age. When I was born my parents died suddenly from a heart attack. I know I don’t wanna grow up an think of that as a cool thing anyways luckily I had four older brothers Patrick who was 24, Rob 17, Thomas 16 and Emilio who was 15 (That‘s their age back then, not when I was born). I never understood my brothers, not even Patrick he was the one who always seemed to treat Me as if I was a outsider like I never belonged. But I never seemed to care, because I never payed any attention to him anyhow. Rob, Thomas and Emilio never seemed to be out of trouble always out their breaking the law. As for me I was tall, skinny and quite handsome well me an my whole brothers had that look thing going on we all had the slickest brown hair ever an the nicest green eyes you ever saw. I had one friend Matthew, but everyone called him Matt. Matt never seemed to care what I was like or who I hanged with or even when I got caught getting into deep crap he never bailed out on Me. Matt was like a brother to me I would call him my brother instead of Patrick. Matt was a tough, mean, broad and strong looking kinda guy, He had the most charming eyes you would ever see they was nicer then anyone of us and he was only 19. But Matt had two other friends Tom and Tim the two twins they were 17. Matt didn’t seem to like them when they talked to me but they sure were handsome nearly every girl liked them. The twins never really liked to be followed by girls who they didn’t know, it was hard to believe that they weren’t T.V pop stars. They both had blonde hair blue eyes and they had a good build. Tim and Tom were so good looking they sometimes didn’t get charged by the Police officers, but hated being treated like they were pretty boys to them it was like never getting to get disciplined, as for john and his boys

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Comments:

good descriptions, but as Darkfairy said it really doesn't draw the reader in! I'm sorry if i sounds mean, it's a great story though!

Posted: Apr 1, 2008

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Posted: Nov 9, 2008

Author Comment:

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