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Angel Break

Novel By: CircusDoll
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Dorolla is sent to Earth with a job, it includes taking care of the infamous Crystal Melodia, who's HKP is failing to grow any more, but is instead emptying. View table of contents...


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1 2 3 4 5

Submitted:Aug 8, 2012    Reads: 1    Comments: 0    Likes: 0   


 

Chapter Title: Conversation

"It seems this is quite an important task for you.." Crystal said with cold eyes.

"Yes, I need you to accept. Positively accept. I can't be sent back now."

"Then..I'll let you stay..on the condition that you don't make a big deal out of this. Just follow me, always at my back, like a servant or shadow."

It's not a matter of staying or not Dorolla thought to herself.

"Ahem, I'm an angel, is that how yuo treat us?" Dorolla quistioned with uncertainty

"I treat you how you look & be. You're not firm, you stutter at times, you may think you're above me but I can say I look down on you"

Dorolla's gaze saddened. "You're right..you know..oh but please respect st least God"

Crystal lifted an eyebrow "I....to this "God", it seems he is in fact real so I thank him for creating my ancestors & this world we live in. That is all." she ended with her lips still open as if she wanted to say more.

"You will start tomorrow, I take it you konw basic things like cooking, sewing, dressing"

"Oh I do, I practiced before ocming here"  Dorolla said excitedly

"Do I wear a costume? Do I change my appearance?"

"No, you can stay as yoo are physically if you're comforatabe like that. A girl in her late teenage years seems suitable. However, yes, I will have my head maid prepare you another outfit suitable for this..how should I say it..job you will have"

and with that Crystal left the room leaving Dorolla to observe the beautiful wallpaper & rug.

"Ehh...the wings of birds huh?" said the angel quietly in the room that day. They reminded Dorolla of her wings. 

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This chaper was relatively short, sorry sbout that. I'm planning to intoduce more characters in the next one.

Do you think first person from Dorolla's perspective seems better? i've been thinking of switching to that POV. But I also need to be able to tell Crystal's flashbacks & various other character's thought on what they..do..on their missions





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