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Runaway devil

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Submitted: Aug 22, 2008    Reads: 84    Comments: 18    Likes: 4   


Love is so devious. But, I don’t mess with love. Love cuts you down in your prime of life, makes you into a drug junkie or whatever. I don’t mess with that shit.

I am not as good off as I sound. As love is, my life is shit. I live in the suburbs. You know like high middle class; with like the 5 bedroom with bathrooms. Well I probably richer than I think but it suck because apparently my family doesn’t really have a penny we are in debt. We are in debt up to the moon. I can’t deal with not being able to do what I want or no money for what I need or want

That is why I am leaving tonight. I jumped out my window and on to the second floor roof. It wasn’t very high or I’m just not scared of being high. I jumped of f the roof into a tree and climbed down. I had a friend coming to pick me up. Well not really a friend just a guy that I promised I would pay, he needed the money. I couldn’t do it alone you know.

I was wearing all black pants and shirts. I also had a backpack and a duffle bag with me. I don’t know how I got   down from the tree. You might call me a fit guy but, I just sneak down from that tree a lot. I guess it strengthens me. This would be the last time I would climb down from this tree. I think I had my first kiss on it. I don’t know really know, my first kiss is faint. Just know this tree has the footprint of my history in it. If I could I would probably take it with me.

I reached up and took a leaf from the tree. It seemed kind of pathetic that my most prized possession. I put the leaf in my pocket. My get away driver was late, so I was sitting outside alone in the dark. I got to thinking of the little things I was leaving behind. Nothing special, but she thinks I am special. Her name is Young May she like loves me. Practically stalks me. I spend a lot of time with her, but we are just friend, in my mind. She thinks we are like lovers. She knows how I feel about that, love is a waste of time.

“Jia, What are you doing out here all alone I saw you sneak out from my window” Young came out of nowhere screaming with here quiet voice.

 “Jesus would you warn me before you sneak up on me” I said annoyed by her stalking

“I am sorry I didn’t mean to startle you. I just saw you from my window and you looked so lonely and….” I interrupted her mid sentence.

“Look I didn’t really want to tell you because I know how you are, but I am running away and I don’t want you try to stop me. I am going and you can’t stop me.” I said that not looking in her eyes. She had such beautiful eyes. That is the only reason I keep her around. I just look into her eyes when she ever she talks to me about something I don’t care about, and that is mostly all the time. I love her eyes though. I guess it is another prized possession.

“Ok then we will run away wait here and I can get a couple of things.” She was about to rush to her home.

“Hey Young you can’t run away with me you have a family”

“So, you do too.”

“My family doesn’t care about me, yours does. Plus, what about School”

“Hello dummy I got my high school diploma yesterday. Who cares? I got to get out of here. I hate it here. It is so boring here. Just take me with you, it will be romantic.

“Ok ok don’t go there you know we are just friends. Just get your stuff.” Young smiled so wide and her eyes gleamed in the moon.

“Thanks Jia love ya.” She ran in too the darkness.


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Comments:

This human tragic story looks like it will build to something interesting, waiting for chapter 2

Posted: Aug 26, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks I will get on that.:D

interesting...:) keep me posted

Posted: Aug 30, 2008

Author Comment:

will do :D

I like it so far..can't wait to read more. keep me posted :)

Posted: Sep 13, 2008

Author Comment:

sure you should be a fan of mine.

pretty good. i liked it.

Posted: Sep 13, 2008

Author Comment:

thank it is just the beginnig though there will be more

Very intriguing I can't wait to read more.

Posted: Sep 13, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks, (searches dictionary for intriguing) :P

This is pretty interesting. It's a good start. :)

Posted: Sep 13, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks I just got the idea you know and started writing

Intriguing. A little confusing but once I got into it, it wasn't so hard to follow. Try to be a little more descriptive of people and maybe like where they're at. This could be turned into a supernatural story so quick lol. I like it the way it is, just a few tweaks and it should be a nice flowing story. never forget the flow lol (jk)

Posted: Sep 13, 2008

Author Comment:

thank you, I tried to make it so your not told every detail and like fill it in with your imagination, cuz last time it was too descriptive. :p

Awesome!! cant wait to read more!!

Posted: Sep 13, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks you I try to do my best.

I like it it's a good start

Posted: Sep 13, 2008

Author Comment:

That was what I was going for

Intresting!!! =]

Posted: Sep 13, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks

hah looks interesting :D
nice start ^^

Posted: Sep 14, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks I did my best

awsum can't wait for the next chapter. keep me posted.

Posted: Sep 14, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks become a fan so I can update you

i love it! continue plz!

Posted: Sep 14, 2008

Author Comment:

don't worry I will :P

Hehe interesting, I like it ^-^
Keep me posted, k?

Posted: Sep 14, 2008

Author Comment:

sure become a fan so I can keep you updated

OoO i like it so far..keep me updated...love to see what happend next!

Posted: Sep 14, 2008

Author Comment:

sure become a fan of mine so it will be easy to update you .

Heya Jia.... Liked it... there's a couple of typying errors which made it difficult for me to follow but it's not major. Interesting first chapter and you deffinitely succeeded in captivating me. Would love to follow. Keep me posted okay?

Posted: Sep 15, 2008

Author Comment:

ok sure thanks for the comment.

as i read the first few lines , i was starting to think this wouldnt be my cup of tea at all but in fairness , i stuck at it , i'm so pleased i did , its a very good read and i don't doubt now that it will get better and better , i along with many others , will end up hooked and awaiting the next chapter impatiently .

Posted: Sep 16, 2008

Author Comment:

oh reall ok it will come soon I just got alot of time on my hands.

i like it let me know when you have wrote more xx

Posted: Sep 21, 2008

Author Comment:

ok become a fan so it is easy to find you



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