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Lyrics- that everone can relate to

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Lyrics are the things many people relate to here are a few i relate to in alot of ways... there also brilliant songs... and my attempts of making my own lyrics relating to the topic.. View table of contents...

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Submitted: Aug 14, 2008    Reads: 119    Comments: 15    Likes: 2   


todays lyrics are about the feelings for those no longer with us and how we feel about them.

In your honour - Foo Fighters

Can you hear me
Hear me screamin'
Breaking in the muted sky
This thunder heart
Like bombs beating
Echoing a thousand miles

Mine is yours and yours is mine
There is no divide
In your honor
I would die tonight

Mine is yours and yours is mine
I will sacrifice
In your honor
I would die tonight
For you to feel alive

Can you feel me
Feel me breathing
One last breath before I close my eyes
This offering
For receiving
Deliver me into the other side

Mine is yours and yours is mine
There is no divide
In your honor
I would die tonight

Mine is yours and yours is mine
I will sacrifice
In your honor
I would die tonight
For you to feel alive

For you to feel alive
For you to feel alive
For you to feel alive

^  I beleive that anyone who has lost a loved one will fell as I do about this song, these lyrics are what I feel for my sister..these lyrics are so beautifully done as is the song.

Here is my attempt at doing lyrics that are the same topic as above...

Of all the things I wish to do, theres one thing I would give to you

Take my place my dear,I'd die for you to be alive. Tonight

breathe my air, breathe my life.

Take my place so you can thrive

I feel unworthy of my life.

It is unused, it is abused, it is nothing

I am more of a ghost than you,

and I am alive.

You were too young to die that way, I am older and need a break,

Breathe my life, breathe my air

If I were asked to swap with you I would in a heartbeat,

without a doubt, without a care.

I scream to you in the dead of the night, take my life so you can feel alive

take my life so you can feel alive,

take my life so you can feel alive,

Tonight.

um yeah thats my poem / lyrics  sooo yea let my know how you feel or even write your own if you feel the need. I suppose this is more of a poem or a collection of words relating to the topic than lyrics but oh well let me know what you think. -Renee


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Comments:

I like what you're doing here with the lyrics posted and then your own version of the topic...and I gotta say that your lyrics are deep, heartfelt and they come off excellent, as far as they work for like a song...I was also wondering if u played anything?

Posted: Aug 14, 2008

Author Comment:

hahahahahahahha i play the harmonica... heheh well im teaching myself im at an intermediate level now but yeah thats it. thanks heaps for the comments!

this is awesome. and i like your verison verrry much! ill be checkin up on this so i can see what lyrics you post next!!this is a great idea
Lemon

Posted: Aug 14, 2008

Author Comment:

yes sometimes i have the occasional ingenious thoughts... hehe thanks!

That was Great.

Posted: Aug 15, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks! i really appreciate it!

just letting you all know i came up with this poem/lyrics on the spot so yeah hehe! -ciao

Posted: Aug 16, 2008

Hey, that's pretty good! I write lyrics too, I think you're onto a winner with your version. I also think this was a genious idea! I shall be back! ;) ~ Nixie

Posted: Aug 16, 2008

Author Comment:

yes i no im a genious hehe not really well sometimes i have brilliant ideas hehe so yea thanks heaps hay chapter 2 is up... check it out!

i like this and i also loved the foo fighters which songs are going to do next?

Posted: Aug 17, 2008

Author Comment:

well if you check out chapter two theres another song on there from the plain white t's um and hmmm im not sure there is a song on the radio at the mo that i like the lyrics to but i havent heard the name of the band yet... i might do another foo fighters one or a muse one i love muse they have awesome lyrics... thanks heaps for the lovely comment!

Great lyrics.I liked them.So sentimental.

Posted: Aug 17, 2008

Author Comment:

aww thanks heaps!

Wow, the title is right. I can relate to it! It's very sad, and deep, which just make it all the more beautiful in it's own way. Very good job!

Posted: Aug 18, 2008

Author Comment:

hey kool thanks heaps and heaps for the wonderful comment ciao!

absolutely beautiful love! i can really relate to what you are saying. there are many loved ones i lost that i'd find myself saying "it should have been me" i dont think its fair that i keep on smiling, laughing, crying and they cant. it kills me inside. but knowing that they cant and i can is what keeps me doing it...its almost like they are alive through me. so i keep on going, living, for them. they will always be with me...with us.

Posted: Aug 21, 2008

Author Comment:

awww thanks for the sweet comment maria i thank you many many many times hehe yes its sad they are gone but not forgotten!! hehe thanks again! -Renee

i loved ur lyrics they were awesome

Posted: Aug 31, 2008

Author Comment:

thanky heapsy lotsy woopsy i better stop these! haha thanks!!

definitely touching.. I can relate to it too, keep it up!

Posted: Sep 10, 2008

Author Comment:

keep up the kool comments hehe much appreciated!

hi! renee.

1. RENEE: As Renee you are rather serious-minded, responsible, and stable. You have the gift of tact and diplomacy, and possess a charming, easy-going nature which endears you to others. You have a serious desire to understand the heart and mind of everyone, and could be very effective in a career or in volunteer work where you are handling people and serving in a humanitarian way. This name also gives you a love of home and family, and as a parent you would likely be fair and understanding.


3. MAY 24, 1988: Your date of conception was on or about 1 September 1987 which was a Tuesday. You were born on a Tuesday under the astrological sign Gemini. Your Life path number is 1.

Your fortune cookie reads: You will have a very pleasant experience.

Life Path Compatibility: You are most compatible with those with the Life Path numbers 1, 5 & 7.
You should get along well with those with the Life Path numbers 3 & 9.
You may or may not get along well with those with the Life Path number 8.
You are least compatible with those with the Life Path numbers 2, 4, 6, 11 & 22.

The Julian calendar date of your birth is 2447305.5.
The golden number for 1988 is 13.
The epact number for 1988 is 11.
The year 1988 was a leap year.

Your birthday falls into the Chinese year beginning 2/17/1988 and ending 2/5/1989. You were born in the Chinese year of the Dragon.
Your Native American Zodiac sign is Elk; your plant is Mullein.
You were born in the Egyptian month of Mesore, the fourth month of the season of Shomu (Harvest).
Your date of birth on the Hebrew calendar is 9 Sivan 5748. Or if you were born after sundown then the date is 10 Sivan 5748.
The Mayan Calendar long count date of your birthday is 12.18.15.1.1 which is 12 baktun 18 katun 15 tun 1 uinal 1 kin
The Hijra (Islamic Calendar) date of your birth is Tuesday, 7 Shavval 1408 (1408-10-7).
The date of Easter on your birth year was Sunday, 3 April 1988.
The date of Orthodox Easter on your birth year was Sunday, 10 April 1988.
The date of Ash Wednesday (the first day of Lent) on your birth year was Wednesday 17 February 1988.
The date of Whitsun (Pentecost Sunday) in the year of your birth was Sunday 22 May 1988.
The date of Whisuntide in the year of your birth was Sunday 29 May 1988.
The date of Rosh Hashanah in the year of your birth was Monday, 12 September 1988.
The date of Passover in the year of your birth was Saturday, 2 April 1988.
The date of Mardi Gras on your birth year was Tuesday 16 February 1988.

As of 9/27/2008 9:34:16 PM EDT: You are 20 years old. You are 244 months old. You are 1,061 weeks old. You are 7,431 days old. You are 178,365 hours old. You are 10,701,934 minutes old. You are 642,116,056 seconds old.

Celebrities who share your birthday:
Billy Gilman (1988) Joe Dumars (1963) Rosanne Cash (1955)
Priscilla Presley (1945) Patti LaBelle (1944) Gary Burghoff (1943)
Bob Dylan (1941) Tommy Chong (1938)

Top songs of 1988
Roll with It by Steve Winwood Every Rose Has Its Thorn by Poison
One More Try by George Michael Look Away by Chicago
Never Gonna Give You Up by Rick Astley Sweet Child O' Mine by Guns N' Roses
Anything for You by Gloria Estefan & Miami Sound Machine Get Outta My Dreams, Get into My Car by Billy Ocean
Man In the Mirror by Michael Jackson The Flame by Cheap Trick

Your age is the equivalent of a dog that is 2.90841487279843 years old. (Life's just a big chewy bone for you!)

Your lucky day is Wednesday. Your lucky number is 5. Your ruling planet(s) is Mercury. Your lucky dates are 5th, 14th, 23rd. Your opposition sign is Sagittarious. Your opposition number(s) is 3. Today is not one of your lucky days!

There are 239 days till your next birthday on which your cake will have 21 candles. Those 21 candles produce 21 BTUs, or 5,292 calories of heat (that's only 5.2920 food Calories!). You can boil 2.40 US ounces of water with that many candles.

In 1988 there were approximately 3.7 million births in the US.
In 1988 the US population was approximately 226,545,805 people, 64.0 persons per square mile.
In 1988 in the US there were 2,389,000 marriages (9.7%) and 1,183,000 divorces (4.8%)
In 1988 in the US there were approximately 1,990,000 deaths (8.8 per 1000)
In the US a new person is born approximately every 8 seconds.
In the US one person dies approximately every 12 seconds.

In 1988 the population of Australia was approximately 16,687,082.
In 1988 there were approximately 246,193 births in Australia.
In 1988 in Australia there were approximately 116,816 marriages and 41,007 divorces.
In 1988 in Australia there were approximately 119,866 deaths.

Your birthstone is Emerald. The Mystical properties of Emerald: Though not meant to replace traditional medical treatment, Emerald is used for physical and emotional healing. Some lists consider these stones to be your birthstone. (Birthstone lists come from Jewelers, Tibet, Ayurvedic Indian medicine, and other sources). Agate, Chrysoprase

Your birth tree is Chestnut Tree, the Honesty. Of unusual beauty, does not want to impress, well-developed sense of justice, vivacious, interested, a born diplomat, but irritable and sensitive in company, often due to a lack of self-confidence, acts sometimes superior, feels not understood, loves only once, has difficulties in finding a partner.

There are 89 days till Christmas 2008!
There are 102 days till Orthodox Christmas!
The moon's phase on the day you were born was waxing gibbous.

Posted: Sep 27, 2008

Author Comment:

hiya! hay thanks heaps for this very entertaining, thanks thanks thanks!! hopoe you have a good day!

oh boy. thats was very good, very deep. i dont know who the foo fighters are, but i'm sure your lyrics beat them by far! (if thats a good thing) !! :L

Posted: Sep 28, 2008

Author Comment:

heheh wow im very thankful for your awesome comment hehe you dont know about the foo fighters? you so should have a go at listening to em there a rock band hehe thanks for the kool comment

Cooooollll...... meg deep..... way cool lyrics!!! Wish I could hear them sung....... Who are da foo fighters???? I crazy liked it!!! nice job!!!

Posted: Oct 17, 2008

Author Comment:

what? again someone who hasnt heard of the foo fighters, geez you so should listen to em sometime. there a rock band.

Awesome lyrics they're really to me heartfelt

Posted: Oct 20, 2008

Author Comment:

awww thanks that makes me feel good that i can make people feel like that



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