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Charge The Mountains

Novel By: saratopia
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for Lydia, and Matt, Punishment, Ant, and Lionheart.

Lydia- Lydia
Matt- Hayden
Punishment- Jacob
Ant- Daniel
Lionheart- Jordan
me ( Sarah )- Nicole
Cheles- Rosalie
Bellz- Bella View table of contents...

Chapters:

1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20

Submitted: May 26, 2008    Reads: 114    Comments: 10    Likes: 5   


Charge the Mountains
 
1: dreams
 

        Houses burning, people screaming. Blood every where, darkness consuming me. All I could do was stand and watch.

        “Lydia…” I heard a faint whisper. “Lydia…” I heard it again. I turned around franticly. I could see no one, no one at all. “Lydia…” This time, the voice was clearer, it sounded scared. I turned my head once more, finally spotting a person in the falling fire. I ran through the falling fire, and body parts, only to find a sight no on should have to see. Sprawled on the hard, cold ground, was my friend Nicole. Her long red hair, drenched in blood. Her face, deep cuts, and bruises. “Help me.” She pleaded. “Get it out.” She moaned again.

        “Get what out? What’s going on? How did this happen?!?!” I yelled. Nothing was making sense. I looked around for help, only to find dead bodies every where. I looked back down and Nicole, who was coughing up blood.

        “Save yourself… get out… there is nothing you can do for me now…” She cried. This couldn’t be happening, she was DIEING!!

        “Who did this to you?” I yelled again.

        “Lydia? Stay strong… for me.” She whispered with her last breath. She was gone.

        “No!! You can’t leave me! Come back, Come back!” I screamed. But I knew, nothing could bring her back. Nothing at all.

“Ahhhhhhhh!” I woke up in a cold sweat.   




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Comments:

SARAH!!!!!!!!!!
T_T

Posted: May 26, 2008

Author Comment:

W?????

oh no my friends dying. whose nicole supposed to be.
Lydia_xxxx

Posted: May 26, 2008

Author Comment:

idk. me.

bahhh, such a great start! I was captivated beggining to end. Can't wait for more:D
Steph(:

Posted: May 26, 2008

Author Comment:

lol thx, i will post the rest tonight. ^_^

omg!
That was like werid!
Write more so i can find out what happens!
:D

Posted: Jun 5, 2008

Author Comment:

lol, there is more.

Lionheart
(not registered user)

So you start this by killing yourself HAhAhhAHAhAhAH!!!!!! Well i wasnt expecting it so well done hahahhahahaha.

Nice title. I will keep reading!

Posted: Jun 6, 2008

Author Comment:

thx. lol =P

Oh, well after 9. :)

Posted: Jun 6, 2008

Author Comment:

lol, omg.

i was just goiung through ur story when i relized i didnt comment this page so..... IT'S AWSOME GURL-E-O!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!LOL! I have way to much time on my hands!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Posted: Jun 6, 2008

Author Comment:

then call me!! lol.

AAAAAAAAAH! THIS IS SOOO DEEP!!! ok and the song fits in PERFECTLY!!!!

Posted: Jun 9, 2008

Author Comment:

THANK YOU! lol

Sarah is this the story i helped you write a little bit in gym that one day? This is really great keep writing i can't wait to read more!

Posted: Jun 16, 2008

Author Comment:

lol, yes it is. I'm glad u helped me with it to.

SARAH!!!! THIS IS GOOD!!! i LOVE!!! going to go read more!!XD!!!
DOM!

Posted: Aug 1, 2008

Author Comment:

hehe, DOM!!!! THANK YOU!! lol, I hope u like it



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